Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

How he did it

Monday, July 31, 2006

I always wondered how the Operative trapped Inara. One shot of the conversation between the two. Ratings are shiny. Comments are shinier.

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He approached slowly, climbing each step with gentle determination. She wore the soft, welcoming smile she gave all new clients and parents of prospective students as they entered the training ground. His eyes were open, clear and direct. His face was calm. So calm and patient. The outcome of this meeting was assuredly his and so he had no reason to be anything but calm. The smile on her face began to fade. But his air of patience gave her a small bit of comfort. It wasn't violence then he was here for. He was prepared to take his time, to convince her of the absolute rightness of his mission, to convince her to play a part in it.

He stood two steps below her, his head even with her shoulders as he gazed up to her. But the look on his face made her feel smaller. Reading body language, even miniscule reflexes and tics not noticed by those with lesser training, was second nature for her. She recognized before he even stopped moving that this was not about the Training House or even the Guild. It wasn't even about her, exactly. Stopping below her wasn't to help her feel less intimidated - it was to show her that she was but one pinnacle, one obstacle to overcome to achieve a larger goal. And that this one obstacle was not going to be much of a challenge for him. The smile on her face slowly disappeared, a look of alarm only recognizable by the widening of the eyes.

"Inara Serra. You are lovelier than your registration holo." He said with a gentle nod of the head. Perfect timbre of the voice gave the statement's delivery a quiet fondness. It was delivered to achieve two tiny advantages - to give her a moment to collect herself and to let her know he had access to her Guild records. He wasn't a fool, he knew what Companions were required to learn and he wanted her at her fullest capabilities. It would be the only way she could truly accept his offer.

Her smile returned, a bit more brittle than before as she acknowledged his compliment. "Thank you." She kept eye contact with him.

Moments passed in

Comments
Monday, 31 July 2006 22:40
This was a masterful way of making sense of Inara's wave to Mal and also her irritation at the Captain when he does, against her expectations, go to rescue her - knowing full well that it *is* a trap. Ah, affairs of the heart even unrequited ones demand the highest of sacrifices. This was just so neat, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 01 August 2006 00:04
Beautifully done. The conversations rang very true to the characters.

>It was a true pleasure to work on this level of parry and thrust with words.

Very exceptional piece of writing. The above thought from the Operative, and many others, were perfectly done.
Tuesday, 01 August 2006 00:45
I always wished they'd clarified what exactly had happened between Inara and the Operative when he appeared, and this as good as anything Joss could have come up with. Beautiful stuff!
Thursday, 03 August 2006 05:18
Definitely a fabulous interpretation of what exactly caused Inara to WAVE Mal with her "request" during the BDM, ECAmber:D

And you definitely channelled the Operative here...could totally see this as a missing scene between Inara and the Operative. Using the Maidenhead holo feed was a rather masterful touch to make his point;)

BEB

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