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Beginning's End Part 11

Tuesday, April 17, 2007

This is the product of a lengthy battle with writer's block, and I'm not entirely sure I'm happy with it. Inara and Stephanie have a chat, and when Badger's involved, things never go smooth. This chapter's essentially here to set up for the next chapter, which I anticipate to be the last of this series.

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As the barbell reached the top of its arc of motion, Jayne caught it with one hand and set it in its holder. The Shepherd sat up from where he had been lying on his back on the weight bench, working to keep his aging muscles in suitable strength and tone, and reached for the towel lying not far away. His breathing was heavy with exertion.

“You gonna make it, old man?” Jayne asked, jokingly, as he added more weight to the bar for his own exercise.

“Oh, I imagine I’ll live at least another day. Perhaps even until our next landfall,” Shepherd Book replied, smiling, as he stood and mopped at his face with the towel.

“Cap’n better have somethin’ lined up on Persephone. Been near three gorram weeks since we left Malachi and we ain’t had nothin’ ‘cept that two-bit grain transport job. I didn’t sign on with this crew to see the verse. If we ain’t got no ruttin’ work, I ain’t getting’ no ruttin’ pay.” The frustration leaked into Jayne’s voice as he lay down on the weight bench and lined his shoulders up under the bar.

“I’m sure the Captain has some kind of plan—he usually does. He’s most likely being more cautious now because of the sort of attention we’ve attracted lately,” the Shepherd replied soothingly.

“Well, caution don’t keep me in whiskey ‘n ammo, Preacher. I’m increasin’ly missin’ the days when this boat weren’t a gorram floatin’ fugee camp.”

“Jayne! You don’t mean that! He don’t mean that, Stephanie,” Kaylee’s voice carried down from the catwalk overhead. The girl walked slowly across the catwalk, her arm out to steady Stephanie as the older woman stepped out to lean on the railing. As the weeks on board Serenity passed, Stephanie was regaining the use of her lower extremities faster than even Simon had thought possible, to the point that she could now limp about the ship. She couldn’t go fast, or far without stopping to rest, but her bruises were fading as her body cleared the drugs that had been forced into it and she was allowed to rest and heal. Some of the damage her body h

Comments
Tuesday, 17 April 2007 07:56
*Begs for feedback*...Even bad attention is better than no attention at all....
C'mon, guys, it takes like 10 seconds.
Tuesday, 17 April 2007 09:04
I liked this and am glad that Mal turned down Badger's job in the skin trade. Laying low is the right thing for them to do and yes, it would have made their world easier had they killed Badger eons ago but it also would have made different kind of complications. At least with Badger they know who and what they are dealing with, who knows what *tamade hundan* would rise out of the slime to replace him. I really like Stephanie and it was very well done how she put her finger on Inara's problem then left the solution in the Companion's hands. Neat. And Jayne, as soon as the notion of getting some trim raising its' head all his grumpyness is gone. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
EPM0001
Tuesday, 17 April 2007 12:41
I was happy to see another chapter of this story. It's very good. MOre please.
Tuesday, 17 April 2007 13:40
Hahaha, Jayne was hilarious at the end there. Stephanie and Inara's conversation was a bit shorter than expected, but then I can understand Stephanie not wanting to hang around. I like the fact she was so blunt with Inara. Also, best line in the chapter:

"Badger rose to his feet and came around to the front of his desk to stand in front of Mal, although doing so afforded him very little advantage, as it only served to accentuate how much shorter he was than Mal, Jayne, or Zoe—very fine hat and all."

That was just brilliant. Good work!
Wednesday, 18 April 2007 22:00
Oooh...lots of interesting moments here, Uncomprehending. Definitely have a cornucopia of topics to choose from;)

The Mal vs. Badger sceene was quite well done, as Mal was in fine form e with his controlled fury and indignation at getting told that he either gets to violate his morals by shipping slaves or Badger drops a line to the Alliance about Mal's whereabouts. I peresonally would have kicked this Cockney midget's ass;)

And damn was I waiting for a verbal slobberknocker between Inara and Stephanie. However, I gotta say the actual conversation was definitely brilliant cuz Inara just got sandbagged by Stephanie's blunt but polite monologue and parting comment. Can't wait to see how Inara deals with the revelation that Stephanie seems to view the relationship she and Mal had once as something in past.

BEB

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