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Burma-Firefly icon: Kaylee Smiles
Thursday, March 29, 2007
I'll keep trying. Certainly got enough screencaps on hand.
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Thursday, 29 March 2007 19:02
Hmm...rhyme is a bit off in the beginning. Maybe lose the "little" in the second image panel so it goes "You can see/Kaylee smile/For seven hundred/thousand miles."
Or tweak it a bit further and have "You can see/Kaylee's smiles/For seven hundred/thousand miles"...flows a bit smoother, IMO. Though it's your baby though, Steamer;)
BEB
Or tweak it a bit further and have "You can see/Kaylee's smiles/For seven hundred/thousand miles"...flows a bit smoother, IMO. Though it's your baby though, Steamer;)
BEB
FLOWSXLIKEXAXRIVER
Thursday, 03 May 2007 20:24
you can see a
Kaylee Smile
for seven hundred
thousand miles
pretty cool..., but maybe a little bit of a wording change. great idea!
Kaylee Smile
for seven hundred
thousand miles
pretty cool..., but maybe a little bit of a wording change. great idea!
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