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La Escorpiona- The Scorpion-Chapter Three: Objects in the rear view mirror…

Tuesday, March 27, 2007

A Bounty Hunter,torn from her home remolded by the hands of blue. She escapes into the black.Her only target- River tam.But can she kill her? After BDM.

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La Escorpiona- The Scorpion

Author: Tinadoll (aka Tina- That’s me!)

Setting: After BDM

Rating: PG-13- NC-17. This chapter is R

Spoilers: probably-But who cares? We have all seen the episodes?

Author’s note: I have written fan-fic before. But this is my first Fireflyfic and my first serious (kind of) one. Scorpion is mine. All Spanish, Latin or any other language will be in parenthesis. This could get messy folks. My spelling and grammar is horrible. And my humor is odd. And I’m a fan girl. LOL ENJOY

Disclaimer: Firefly et al. Are properties of Joss Whedon- Those who don’t like that will get punched in the Kidneys.

And also I used(and butchered) an Army of Darkness quote. Thats Sam Raimi's

Prologue-http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15784

Chapter 1:

http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15877

Chapter 2:

http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15901

Chapter Three: Objects in the rear view mirror…

Its pitch black.

And here she was sitting up a gorram tree waiting for the target to show. She knew that she would be greatly rewarded for bring her in.

But she shouldn’t count the chickens before they hatched.

River wouldn’t have backup. The crew of Serenity was drunk.

But was it going to be that easy. Scorpion couldn’t be too sure.

She was sure however that she was tired of this life. This would be her last mission

….

After years of study the time had finally come for her to earn her keep.

In her room, she was painting.It wasn’t anything special, just a asian highly stylized crane. Her room was her only sanctuary from her master.In her room she felt whole.

She heard him enter but didn’t stop painting.

“ Little one.” Her master said. “Its time.”

“Time.” She replied as she turned around. Her voice was monotone as usual. It wasn’t a question. It was a statement.

“Time for you to show me how much you are worth.” He said. Patting her on the head as usual.

“ Haven’t I already shown you my loyalty, Saiai?” she said, some c

Comments
Tuesday, 27 March 2007 20:43
Huh, posted a comment and it never appeared.
Still lovin' it. Tons of places it could go from here.
Wednesday, 28 March 2007 22:43
Huh...a bit rough in formatting and flow, but I do love what you're doing here Tinadoll. Guess I just wish for more more more;D

BEB
Thursday, 31 May 2007 13:37
BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!

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