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La Escorpiona/The Scorpion :Chapter 20- Trust

Wednesday, December 12, 2007

There was this girl named Maria(Code name Scorpion). She was a soilder,then a slave. But she didn't know where she was goin' or where she'd been. She just knows that she is taken in by big damn heroes and now she has to make good on her promise to herself.Her own salvation.or will she just end up stung by the Scorpion? Takes place after BDM.Violent and Adult themes. Jayne/River( River puppy love), OC/Jayne, Simon/Kaylee, Mal/Inara angst

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La Escorpiona/The Scorpion :Chapter 20- Trust

Author: Tinadoll (aka Tina- That’s me!)

Setting: After BDM.

Rating: R to NC-17.

Spoilers: Yes.

Author’s note: I try to beta. Ido the best I can editing by myself but you can do nice by just ignoring all the mistakes. Comments and encouragments appreciated.

Part 1. Chapter 21 is Part 2.

Chapter 20- Trust

She sat there for a couple of moments longer waiting for them to step down the corridor and then closed the doors.

She sent a wave to Dr West who answered.

“Well, Well. It has been so long Scorpion. I would think you had forgotten about me,” he said. “Oh wait- Was I the one that made you forget?” he said as he smiled a devilish smile.

“Herbert, taking the companion was not a smart idea-she could expose you. You know that,” she said, firmly. Even though it had taken forever to adjust to this life (Although she still felt like an outcast) she didn’t feel that Inara, sweet loving Inara, should be in this mans hands.

“I didn’t hurt her. She’s a companion, she’s…..keeping me company. Besides-I just wanted to get your attention” He said, a smile crept upon his lips. “I wanted to know- why did you run? I would have found you and rescued you.”

“It wanted chance at freedom and I didn’t want to rely on anyone to rescue me,” she said, crossing her arms. She had done it to be free. Besides she was meant to give her life as punishment. She had to do it her way. She noticed how smitten Dr West was with her and it made her sick. But maybe she could use that.

“Freedom,” his voices raised in anger at the next part: “You all talk about Freedom. You all don’t know what freedom is, Independent scum. Freedom is what I can give you-nothing more, nothing less. You are meant to obey the ones in charge. They protect you, feed you, clothe you, give you jobs- and you repay them with this talk about freedom!”

“You think you are talking to the council again don’t you, West? Do me a favor. It’s me Scorpion, killer, and psychopath. Get to the point,” s

Comments
Thursday, 13 December 2007 08:07
You know this fic, is like watching a car wreck. You just can't stop estaring. But aside from that it's pretty interesting. I just wish your OC Wasn't so... freakish. She kind of creeps me out
Thursday, 13 December 2007 17:34
Gorram comment didn't make it again. Oh well. I love the uneasy feeling Scorpion encounters with being around the crew. It helps show how uneasy they feel having her around. Previous comment was much more profound but I can't remember the whole thing.

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