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La Escorpiona/The Scorpion: Chapter 23:Deep

Tuesday, January 8, 2008

There was this girl named Maria(Code name Scorpion). She was a soilder,then a slave. But she didn't know where she was goin' or where she'd been. She just knows that she is taken in by big damn heroes and now she has to make good on her promise to herself.It keeps getting worse for her.Now she has sparked the interest of an evil man. He wants her for his own.Run Scorps Run. Takes place after BDM.Violent and Adult themes

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La Escorpiona/The Scorpion

Author: Tinadoll (aka Tina- That’s me!)

Setting: After BDM.

Rating: R to NC-17.

Spoilers: Yes.

Author’s note : Thank you all for reading my fic-Only a few chapters left. Previous warnings are still in effect. No beta. Just me trying to write as best i can. Please comment- it helps me get motivated.

Chapter 23: Deep

blank stare

disrepair

there's a big black hole

gonna eat me up someday

someday fades away

like a memory

or a place that you'd rather be

some place lost in space

itch in my head, that's telling me somewhere

somewhere out there anywhere

i don't care, get me out of here (Nine inch nails-Deep)

Scorpion checked the closet for the appropriate apparel to meet her supposed arch-enemy. She found a pair of boots that would suit her needs-comfortable and highly stylized.

She wouldn’t care whether the blood spattered on them or not.

Black again. Like her mood.

The door chimed and she took a seat on a nearby chair. She held a riding crop in her hands-she wanted Lady Yoshida to know that she was detected during her visit to Badger.

“Enter.” She said and Yoshida stepped forward.

“Well,” the widow started but then she saw the crop, she sniffled and Scorpion narrowed her eyes.

“About time,” Scorpion said. She took out a clove cigarette out of a container that was on the desk and lit it.

Lady Yoshida was pondering what to say next to her, so she just got to the point- “You killed my husband,”

“…So?” Scorpion retorted as she blew smoke.

“I loved him!” Lady Yoshida exclaimed.

“Don’t bullshit the bullshit artist, lady,” Scorpion retorted. “He’s dead and you inherited all his money. He hurt a lot of people-especially woman. I am guessing that he hurt you more then you want to let on. You want to live with the façade of this great man, but your husband was a murdering thieving good for nothing. It’s time to move on- take the money and live free.”

At that the older woman sat on the bed but there was s

Comments
Tuesday, 08 January 2008 19:33
UHG. The suspense of it all. Now I really can't wait to find out Scorpions secrets.
Wednesday, 09 January 2008 22:51
And the suspense just builds and builds. This just keeps getting better as it goes along!
Friday, 25 January 2008 07:55
It's getting really good now!!

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