Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

La Escorpiona- The Scorpion-Chapter 2: Night Sounds.

Thursday, March 22, 2007

A Bounty Hunter,torn from her home remolded by the hands of blue. She escapes into the black.Her only target- River tam.But can she kill her?

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2735    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Author: Tinadoll (aka Tina- That’s me!)

Setting: After BDM

Rating: PG-13- NC-17. This chapter is PG-14

Spoilers: probably-But who cares? We have all seen the episodes?

Author’s note: I have written fan-fic before. But this is my first Fireflyfic and my first serious (kind of) one. Scorpion is mine. All Spanish, Latin or any other language will be in parenthesis. This could get messy folks. My spelling and grammar is horrible. And my humor is odd. And I’m a fan girl. LOL ENJOY

Disclaimer: Firefly et al. Are properties of Joss Whedon- Those who don’t like that will get punched in the Kidneys

Chapter 2: Night Sounds.

Night came quicker then she would have liked it. She enjoyed sitting there staring at the sleeping hunk of man meat.

You see-Things happen in the outer rim when night falls. And none of it good.

It had only been two hours of waiting but she took very good care of Jayne, who was on a bunk. She put him on her mule and they set out back to Serenity. She was careful to park it out if sight and then she dragged Jayne back to the ship

No one was around so she quietly crept into the ship and dumped Jayne in his bunk and she crept about.

Serenity was a nice ship. It had a homey cozy feel to it. She smelled lilies, strawberries, musk, and something else she had never smelled before.

It just needed a little …

“And then we got it.*laugh* That damn goose and killed it” she heard slurring and noises (mostly insane laughter) coming from outside. It seems the good crew of serenity had been partying and the Captain (among other people) got rip roaring drunk. He was talking about some water foul he must have killed during some point.

Scorpion climbed up the wall and hid in a corner.

She at the head of the table .The Chairman, the wealthy owner of the Blue Sun Corporation sat at the other end. They were sitting in his expansive boardroom. The desk was a wood oak color. Perhaps from a forest on Earth-that-was. She couldn’t be sure and she didn’t want to speculate. The room was

Comments
Thursday, 22 March 2007 23:59
Oooh....well now. The level of "interesting" - Hoban Washburne definition - just got higher, I must say.

Really liked how you had River and Maria/Scorpion sort of mentally meet, bow and then prepare to get to the ass kicking. Very...imaginative. Gotta wonder though if the crew is faking the entire "drunken party" scenario. Cuz I can't imagine them partying when Jayne's missing.

BEB
Friday, 23 March 2007 00:02
Awesome! Little choppy in the continuity but it played well with character development.

Luvvvin' it!

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