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Unfinished Business -- Chapter Fifteen

Monday, March 19, 2007

A couple of good, ol' fashioned surprise attacks.

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Unfinished Business

Chapter Fifteen

The alley that snaked behind the buildings facing the waterfront was relatively empty, for this time of day, he noted as his bodyguards carefully checked it out. A few shoppers looking for bargains, a gaggle of Turkish women in colorful burkahs shopping for spices, a few emaciated beggars, but no sign of real problem. He nodded to his guard to continue.

Ordinarily he’d take a hovercab to a business meeting like this, but with the rendezvous only a few blocks away from his office, he felt reasonably secure walking the distance – as long as he had plenty of firepower along.

Things had been tense along the docks, recently, with bodies showing up unexpectedly and fires breaking out. Things were getting shaky all over the place, actually, ever since that gorram announcement that the Alliance had slaughtered thirty million people and created the dreaded Reavers in an effort to effectively control the huddling masses. That meant a lot of twisted knickers out there. A man in his line of work had to know which knickers were twisted.

Things had been sliding downhill since then. Local governments everywhere were in turmoil, and that included Persephone’s august Planetary Parliament. There had been a whole flurry of duels and even an assassination or two. And as shake-ups and resignations, personal feuds and jockeying for power went on, the implicit chaos had started to drift down to the lower sections of Eavesdown. You never knew if the copper you bribed last week would be open to the same agreement this week. You never knew if your contact was providing good, solid data or was setting you up for assassination. You never knew if your rivals or old enemies would try to use the situation as cover to gain control. It paid to be cautious.

He heard a noise behind him, and he glanced over his shoulder out of reflex. Merely an old Chinese man slamming down a rice pot lid too hard, he noted with relief, nothing to be worried about. The guards behind him hadn’t eve

Comments
Monday, 19 March 2007 17:37
OK, trying to make a few corrections, won't let me update. I'll keep trying. In the meantime, enjoy and ignore the irritating little errors. I know I do.

And shout out to Our Mr. Badger, Mark Sheppard, who is absolutely KILLING in Battlestar Galactica!

ScrewtheAlliance
Monday, 19 March 2007 20:11
Woohoo! New STA chapter!

Delightful fun, as always, and I love the way you write Badger -- I could see him spitting those lines at a smirky Mal.
Monday, 19 March 2007 20:49
Shiny. Fights and schemes and plans and fights. The bestest.
Monday, 19 March 2007 21:09
This is just a preemptive rave!
Yay!
Monday, 19 March 2007 21:24
Sweet googily moogily! A ScrewtheAlliance update! Hallelujah!

;D

Utterly brilliant and beautiful work here, Screw! Dialogue...perfect. Action sequences....perfect. Big Damn Plan...perfect! So, all in all...perfect!

:D

BEB
Monday, 19 March 2007 21:58
Big Damn Heroes.Mohinder Associates.Hmm...
RANKTYRO
Wednesday, 21 March 2007 03:01
Great chapter!
NEILEI
Thursday, 22 March 2007 01:44
Love it, love it!!! I am guessing that the last standing hand to hand female is our Zoe, but surely the one with the not too bright expression is not Mal, maybe my shiny hero Jayne the not-independent. As always River is there quietly looking back. I can hardly wait for the next chapter!!!
NeiLei
Thursday, 22 March 2007 07:02
Loved it, simply loved it!
Thursday, 22 March 2007 18:38
postemptive rave!
Yay!
this was tighter and fast-paced
than some of your earlier stuff
and i'm Digging it!
Friday, 23 March 2007 04:17
How could I not give a chapter that has a dogfather and the words "husky purple" in it? :-)

(even if "dogfather" isn't the widely-accepted spelling of this word...) ;-)
Friday, 23 March 2007 04:18
How could I not give a 10 to a chapter that has a dogfather and the words "husky purple" in it? :-)

(even if "dogfather" isn't the widely-accepted spelling of this word...) ;-)
Monday, 26 March 2007 23:49
Very cool as always.
Monday, 02 April 2007 21:52
LOVE YOUR WORK!!!!!! I've read all your series so far, and I'm always blown away by your plotlines. Why the hell weren't you writing for the show...we'd still be on the air. Hope to see the next chapter soon. Also, as a personal note, I've always enjoyed the longer stories on this site, because they allow better development of the ideas. Also, I just like reading.

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