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Author's Note: Thanks to Dangermom and LiquidEyes for betaing! Written for fic challenge #8. Scars Simon had never noticed the scar before. He traced the long curved mark darker than the smooth white skin of her lower back. They were curled side by side in her bunk. It was a tight fit, but Kaylee certainly didn't seem to mind. "What happened?" he asked, lips against her spine. "Hmmm?" Her cheek rested on the pillow, light brown hair fanning out over her shoulderblades. "Here." He traced it lightly with a fingertip. "Oh." She giggled. "There was this boy." "Hmmm.... Maybe I don't want to know." "We got caught in the cloakroom at church—" "Church?" "Well, there was a social goin' on," she offered by way of explanation. "He was a bit younger than I thought. You'd never've known it, looking at him. I mean, he was..." she waggled her eyebrows, then laughed. "My daddy whupped me so hard." His hand on her back stilled. "He beat you?" "It was just a welt that didn't heal, is all," she said with a shrug, and Simon was horrified at Kaylee casually describing a beating. "If my father ever laid a finger on River—" "River most like ain't never got herself into half the trouble I did. I was a wild thing. Wild things need taming." Simon could only stare at her, unable to wrap his mind around the concept. "By beating it out of you?" She sat
by Tara LJC O'Shea
Good job.
I love the way you introduced and compared the backstories of both characters, by having them use their pasts to relate to each other it gives them so much depth.
I ended up here after reading your post about no comments, I wouldn't fret it. If this is any example, I really like your writing. And as it is, I haven't had the courage to post any of my stories as yet. Keep trying to improve them and never seem to finish.
Keep Flying ( and writing about it )
*sigh*
Well done!
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