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La Escorpiona- The Scorpion

Wednesday, March 14, 2007

A Bounty Hunter,torn from her home remolded by the hands of blue. She escapes into the black.Her only target- River tam.But can she kill her?

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2938    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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La Escorpiona- The Scorpion

Author: Tinadoll (aka Tina- That’s me!)

Setting: After BDM

Rating: PG-13- NC-17. This chapter is PG-14

Spoilers: probably-But who cares? We have all seen the episodes?

Author’s note: I have written fan-fic before. But this is my first Fireflyfic and my first serious (kind of) one. Scorpion is mine. All Spanish, Latin or any other language will be in parenthesis. This could get messy folks. My spelling and grammar is horrible. And my humor is odd. And I’m a fan girl. LOL ENJOY

Disclaimer: Firefly et al. Are properties of Joss Whedon- Those who don’t like that will get punched in the Kidneys

Prologue: Gloria in te domine (Glory in your name)

She lies in the grass and she checks out the target in her scope, adjusting the measurements accordingly. It was a hot day and she is wearing all black. She wore her brown hair up. Her boots and pants were showing off her slim legs and round butt. That wasn’t her fault-that was just good jeans. Ahem-genes. Good jeans would only go so far. On her back was a samurai sword she had gotten as a present from her master on a birthday. Her work brought her lots of work and lots of presents. Lots of pretty, shiny, silky things. You would almost suspect her to be a companion…

She lay in wake in the grass, like a snake and she took a sip of water and brushed some dirt out of her silk blouse. She was considering lighting a small clove cigarette-very expensive but she hated smoking on the job. Her target wasn’t back yet so she took her time even to day dream.

She remembers where she came from. The world was called Oceanus. Well before the war it was called that. Who knows what the Alliance did to it. There is this fishing port called Orleans where she and her father are from. Her mother- Gloria, was born on the nearby world of Andalusia in the large city of New Barcelona. She was a nurse in the hospital when Jean came in to visit a sick cousin and they hit it off. Jean was of Creole French decent who lived in Orleans as a fisherman. S

Comments
Thursday, 15 March 2007 00:54
Great. Interestin'- just one thing.
Tina, doll, it's JOSS not JOSH.
Thought you should know,ya?

-Danny
Thursday, 15 March 2007 17:05
Likin' the soft edges of a hard character. Seems there are some gramatical errors but they seem to play upon the mindset of a person broke down and rebuilt. Curious where it'll end up. I'll definately be checkin' back.
Thursday, 15 March 2007 22:09
Well now...this is just all kinds of interesting, Tinadoll! Definitely can't wait to see more of this series;D

Some small typographical errors, but given some Browncoat TLC and this would shiny like the infirmary after Simon's had a bad day;D

BEB
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 16:56
Very gripping character intro.

Nicely done.
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 17:39
Ooh...okay, I'm liking this. Really, I am. More!

- Soul
Wednesday, 30 May 2007 19:52
I love your story's

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