Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Something, For Sure

Wednesday, March 14, 2007

Simon loses something he’d already lost, and gains something he already had. S/K, ickle R/J mention, post BDM

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3125    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A/N okay, I wrote this in my head when I was lying in bed trying to sleep. On paper - er, screen - it doesn't seem as good, but then it probably only seemed good to me in the first place 'cos I was zombified at the time. Ho hum. A little backstory, which isn't needed, but may come in to play if I decided to write more in this time frame: We are about 4 years post BDM and the Alliance is holding onto power by the skin of their teeth. It isn't a WAR as such, but an outbreak of terrorism, and of course, Serenity are caught up in it, but they have NOT repeat NOT joined any kind of army. Tee hee.

Erm, Henry is a real bear - my friends. He is small and brown, and you know, a bear. My OWN childhood toy is Bunny, but I felt giving him to Simon would be a bit, well, gay.

So, with no further ado, enjoy. Oh, and bear in mind I NEVER write action on account of the fact that I CAN'T. So this is a lil outta my comfort zone.

Comment. Please?

Something, For Sure

Simon fell on his back. Hard. His head cracked against the gritty ground, hanging awkwardly off the end of Serenity’s ramp. The sky was grey and stained red. Red with blood. So different from the blue sky of Osiris he remembered. He gave himself a moment, a split second in time to wallow in the pain, to lose himself in the stars that had erupted in front of his eyes. It was a trick he’d learned as a surgeon, where a split second was all you had to make a life or death decision. Let the fear envelop you. And then let it go.

His body had barely come to rest on the ground before he was moving again, rolling on to his belly and crawling. He grabbed the pistol that had slipped from his hand and elbowed his way backwards, never leaving the ground. A hand grabbed him and yanked him back, helping his progress considerably. He found himself once more crouched behind a rusty crate, bullets flying over his head.

“Gotta say, doc, you’re impressin’ me more n’ more by the minute,” Mal told him, a roguish grin on his reawakened features as he release

Comments
Wednesday, 14 March 2007 18:03
Lovely, apart from the icky Rayne bit. Please don't do that, it upsets me terribly :)
Wednesday, 14 March 2007 18:14
This was awesome! You write action very well, I don't know what you're worried about! Your S/K is just great, you seem to have their voices down really well. I'm assuming they'll be a companion piece to this in which River opens her box ... probably not with Jayne, but with Jayne coming in once she's done.

I loved the idea of them fighting on Osiris and seeing their house as rubble. That is a great moment to realize you can't go back. So great!
Thursday, 15 March 2007 03:26
Utterly brilliant, Chazzer! Definitely loved the entire tale, but the final scene with Simon and Kaylee exploring Simon's long-buried treasure really was the icing on the cake;D

And don't mind SpaceAnJL...you can churn out as much Rayne as you want and know that at least 1 other person will comment and praise it;D

BEB
Thursday, 15 March 2007 03:57
OH. This...this makes me happy. I can't seem to write S/K from Simon's pov, but it always feels more authentic that way...funny how that is, given that the series gave us more about Kaylee's feelings than Simon's, huh? In any case, this just felt so right. It made me smile like a loon and so did the Rayne bit, secretly. I'm a secret Rayne shipper. :) I loved it.
Thursday, 15 March 2007 09:21
Excellent - could easily be the start of a series. And the action at the beginning was very well done indeed.
Thursday, 15 March 2007 12:54
Fantastic.
The action was awesome and then it got all cute and sweet, which I loved.
The Henry part was just adorable.
Thursday, 15 March 2007 15:09
Oh, this definitely needs a sequel or something! Why were they on Osiris? Why were they fighting? You wrote the action very well. It was engaging right from the start.

I loved that they both hid little boxes and what Simon's contained were so perfect for him. And a little Firefly? Hmm, considering how much he apparently dislikes space, that's definitely interesting. A nice, little back story with that would be good too!

Not a Rayne fan at all, really, so I won't complain if you keep their relationship to a bit of little flirting and concentrate most on S/K! :)
Thursday, 15 March 2007 16:46
Don't worry I will

The idea of Rayne intriguies me but I'm a S/K fan through and through and I couldn't bring myself to write anything even slightly smutty involving River. Or anything fluffy involving Jayne. Which pretty much cuts out anything other than light flirting.

Heehee

Thanks for all the lovely jubbly comments :)

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