Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE
Job Satisfaction
A/N: Firstly, in response to some of the comments from last chapter. What can I say? I knew when I posted it that it would be a little controversial, but this fic is about Simon being torn between his job (River) and his own needs (Kaylee.) I figured he’d need to get pushed to extremes to see that he needs to find a balance. He is certainly gonna spend the rest of this story dealing with the repercussions of his words. Hope ya’ll stick with this, anyway.
Thanks again to Mavourneen, my beta. And thanks for all comments, good or bad.
Comments
Sunday, 10 June 2007 20:24
Oh boy - Mal is going to blow a gasket when he realizes that both Jayne and Simon are gone. I can't help thinking that Jayne's motives are not entirely pure. I liked how you interspersed the current happenings with Simon's memories. Hindsight is always 20/20 - poor Simon.
JESSC
Sunday, 10 June 2007 20:50
I did think Simon's reaction in chapter 4 was a bit strong, but I really do like the interaction with Jayne in this chapter (gotta wonder what he's up to). And I do like the story overall. The mystery with the Tams deepens. Can't wait for more!!
Sunday, 10 June 2007 21:42
Any bets on the possibility of Jayne leaving Simon stranded in the woods after a short "search"? Cuz I imagine Jayne's in that kind of mood at the moment:(
And I seriously hope that River and Kaylee are found before Gabriel and his goons show up and starting making a mess of things. Cuz I would think having those two ready and able to make with the mischief and brilliance would be a good thing;)
BEB
And I seriously hope that River and Kaylee are found before Gabriel and his goons show up and starting making a mess of things. Cuz I would think having those two ready and able to make with the mischief and brilliance would be a good thing;)
BEB
Sunday, 10 June 2007 21:44
Oh, want more. I too wonder about the Tams, but is Badger really going to betray Mal ... again? And Kaylee and River ... things are so not good! Except they are, because the story is!
Monday, 11 June 2007 02:53
So glad I'm not alone in thinking Jayne has less than good intentions in going out with Simon to look for Kaylee.
Would be all kinds of an interesting twist if Simon gets pinched by Daddy while out with Jayne (who eagerly turns him over still mad about what he said to Kaylee) just as River and Kaylee make their way back to the ship.
Ahh, the angst. The anger, and the decisions (coming off from just upsetting Kaylee, how many of the crew would really want to get Simon back?) THAT would cause.
Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter.
Would be all kinds of an interesting twist if Simon gets pinched by Daddy while out with Jayne (who eagerly turns him over still mad about what he said to Kaylee) just as River and Kaylee make their way back to the ship.
Ahh, the angst. The anger, and the decisions (coming off from just upsetting Kaylee, how many of the crew would really want to get Simon back?) THAT would cause.
Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter.
Monday, 11 June 2007 07:56
oooh.... Another chapter.
I've said my peice about Simon's shouting at Kaylee, but I am intrested in where this is going. If Simon got caught, that would be intresting. The rest of the crew would wonder is he was worth rescueing, and Kaylee and River would probrbly feel guilty.
I can't wait to see what happens next ^^
Keep up the good work.
I've said my peice about Simon's shouting at Kaylee, but I am intrested in where this is going. If Simon got caught, that would be intresting. The rest of the crew would wonder is he was worth rescueing, and Kaylee and River would probrbly feel guilty.
I can't wait to see what happens next ^^
Keep up the good work.
Monday, 11 June 2007 13:32
I get the feeling some bad stuff is about to go down.
And I am so looking forward to it.
And I am so looking forward to it.
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