Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE
Job Satisfaction
A/N: Look at that, I updates quickly, especially for Leiasky. Well, okay, also because I won’t have time to do so tomorrow. Leaving Newcastle for the summer : ( Thanks for all comments, and thanks again to my beta, Mavourneen. : )
Comments
Wednesday, 13 June 2007 23:27
While I really liked Kaylee and Regan's conversations, I have no sympathy for Regan. She is Simon and River's mother and that should mean more to her than title.
And Gabriel - well, he's just a stinking pile of go se ... I am glad that Jayne and Simon found River and I love the nicknames you have Jayne using for River (fruit loop was inspired). But I am very concerned over River's reluctance to go get Kaylee. I'm glad she said she would show them, but I'm afraid it's not all going to end rosily.
Oh, the angst ... love it!
And Gabriel - well, he's just a stinking pile of go se ... I am glad that Jayne and Simon found River and I love the nicknames you have Jayne using for River (fruit loop was inspired). But I am very concerned over River's reluctance to go get Kaylee. I'm glad she said she would show them, but I'm afraid it's not all going to end rosily.
Oh, the angst ... love it!
Thursday, 14 June 2007 07:48
While I'm still not sure about anyone's motives, I'm enjoying the story a lot!
Thursday, 14 June 2007 08:01
oooh....
That Regan Tam should realise that force is the last way to get Simon and River back. Simon will never trust her if she acts like this!
Can't wait to read more.
That Regan Tam should realise that force is the last way to get Simon and River back. Simon will never trust her if she acts like this!
Can't wait to read more.
Thursday, 14 June 2007 21:18
Hmm, not sure if I like Regan or not. Seems like she is genuinely concerned for Simon and River.
Simon and Jayne's interactions continue to be a favorite of mine.
And damn papa Tam. Someone needs to shoot him between the eyeballs and be done with it! :)
Simon and Jayne's interactions continue to be a favorite of mine.
And damn papa Tam. Someone needs to shoot him between the eyeballs and be done with it! :)
Monday, 18 June 2007 05:29
Ya know...Regan herself, when she's with Kaylee, is all kinds of sympathetic. It's the fact she's hired some incompetent mercs to get her children back that cause the problem, IMO. It's a mixed message...she wants no violence and a simple reunion; the mercs don't seem to properly grasp that:(
And I too thought the "Simon and Jayne Show" routine was brilliantly done, since their conversations were definitely spot-on! River's wishy-washy reaction to saving Kaylee though? Give me pause...seems like there's a fine line to walk right now when it comes to getting Kaylee back safely.
BEB
And I too thought the "Simon and Jayne Show" routine was brilliantly done, since their conversations were definitely spot-on! River's wishy-washy reaction to saving Kaylee though? Give me pause...seems like there's a fine line to walk right now when it comes to getting Kaylee back safely.
BEB
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