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Unfinished Business -- Chapter Thirteen

Thursday, January 25, 2007

Inara receives some disturbing news.

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Unfinished Business

Chapter Thirteen

Inara really needed to get back to work.

She knew it, of course. By all rights she should have started her practice again as soon as Serenity was spaceworthy once more. But she had been putting it off, encountering one convenient excuse after another, for over a month, now. True, she was due some rest, after the horrors she had witnessed on Miranda, and that rock Mr. Universe had called home. But she was weeks past the point where she could use that as an excuse. The Reunion, likewise, had provided a gay distraction – it had been every wild, wooly thing she had dreamed of about life on the Frontier, and she had indulged herself in the unsophisticated – and decidedly unsanitary – celebration with abandon. But as they left Muir’s orbit, she knew she had to get back on her back, no matter how reluctant she was.

Mal hadn’t made it any easier. He hadn’t asked her for rent once since Miranda, and because of that Inara still had a comfortable cushion of savings to live off of. But it was only a matter of time before the crew got hungry, and the businessman in Mal would force him to her shuttle door. She had enough for a few months, perhaps, but beyond that she was at his mercy. And while the exact nature of their relationship had changed – in what way, she wasn’t entirely certain – she felt most comfortable keeping the business end pure business. No, she needed to get back to work. Otherwise she’d be beholden to Mal, and that she just couldn’t bear.

She looked around her shuttle with a sigh. It was hardly a fit space for her work, anymore. All of her luxurious silks and wall hangings and carpets were back at the training house, clear on the other side of the system. She had done what she could in terms of shopping at the few dusty worlds they had visited since she had rejoined the ship but the result was decidedly low-end.

She had found a few tapestries, the rugged homespun design of which could be told off as “artistic”, in a barbaric sort of way.

Comments
Thursday, 25 January 2007 16:23
Sorry about the delay in posting . . . I have several other projects ($$$!) that I've been working on. I haven't abandoned UB, though . . . it's just something I like to give my full attention to. I save my best stuff for y'all. And it's about to get crazy.

Thanks for reading! Comments are always appreciated!

ScrewtheAlliance
FIREFLYCRACKHEAD
Thursday, 25 January 2007 16:48
Awesome chapter. Digging the meaningful interaction between Mal and Inara beyond banter and sexual tension. Hope your other projects are coming along well. Thanks for at least giving us a fix of UB. Obsessivley checking your profile is finally paying off!
Friday, 26 January 2007 00:39
Oh, how the mighty fall!

Screw, you finally have Inara down.

The Guild's piss-off, the hearing, her loss of credibility, and Mal's reaction are sublime. Joss will be envious he didn't have the opportunity to write this.(Damn Fox)

Will she need legal representation when the mission is all said and done?
Friday, 26 January 2007 02:49
Inara was perfect in this chapter.

Her outrage and conversation with Sheydra was priceless.

Inara is hard to write, believe me I've tried for 3 weeks now with no success, but you have captured her.

This whole series is awesome as usual. Keep up the good work.
Friday, 26 January 2007 06:09
with such a delicate hand you weave this tale....
Friday, 26 January 2007 07:07
I could so see it panning out this way, Inara's reactions and how hard she found it to just relax and accept the help offered was spot on. In places Kaylee's dialogue didn't sound quite right but Inara and Mal were perfect and they ended up in each other's arms so that is wonderful! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 26 January 2007 07:24
Oh...welcome back, Screw! We have been waiting for this with baited breath!

:D

Gotta say...Inara was definitely spot on, and Mal wasn't far behind. I can totally picture Morena going through these motions as Inara, struggling to deal with the idea that suddenly it's not her choice any longer not to take clients and the possibility that she could be our on her mighty fine pigu if things go south during the hearing. And Mal was definitely right on, as I can just picture Nathan having Mal struggle to fathom an emotionally fragile Inara turning to him for comfort during a time of need. Lots of twitches between "Hello nurse!" and "Damn those fools for doing this!" ;)

BEB
Friday, 26 January 2007 09:01
great chapter as always. As they say better late than never. I am very much looking forward to what all you do with the crew in this new story. If your last two are any indication it should be a wild ride.
Saturday, 27 January 2007 13:01
Excellent. Everything as it should be. Y'know, barring Inara being suspended. That sucks. Apart from the possibilities that clearly opens up. So... I'm confused, obviously.

But in a good way.

Shiny.
NEILEI
Friday, 02 February 2007 00:08
Another great read. Loved the line from Mal that his coat was no stranger to tears. Brought tears to my eyes as I read the line. To be able to bring on that kind of emotional response is a great tribute to your skill at characterization. I am looking forward to your next chapter!
Many thanks to ya! Muey shiny!
NeiLei
Friday, 02 February 2007 10:43
I do with you had links from one chapter to the next. since I find myself yet once more going back to start at the begining of KY and reading up to present again. Since i am unable to wait for you next chapter.
DIRK
Tuesday, 06 February 2007 15:43
Love your stories, can’t wait for the next chapter.
RANKTYRO
Thursday, 22 February 2007 02:24
The only complaint I have with your writing is the length of time between posts!

Seriously good writing is hard to find, and when you do find some it is hard to wait for a new installment.

Please keep up the good work.

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