Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Beginning's End part 2

Wednesday, January 3, 2007

The crew wonders about our mystery lady and we find out a little more about where she came from. I live for feedback.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2118    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Kaylee stood outside the infimary, gazing at the doctor through the window. He was immersed in his work, busy patching the woman the captain had brought on board back together. Zoe stood opposite him in surgery, mopping up rivulets of blood and handing him instruments, while Wash sat nearby in a chair, providing more blood for transfusion.

It wasn’t the first time Kaylee had gone out of her way to watch Simon at work. There was something yanqing about the way his hands moved… even though his face was obscured by the white mask, she always liked to watch his fingers as he probed and stitched. Fixing people. Just like he’d fixed her, that one time she’d got shot.

She hoped the cap’n was doing ok. They’d just been finishing up stowing the cargo, her and Zoe and the Shepherd, when they saw Mal and Jayne come trudging out of the woods. Mal had stopped just long enough to set the strange girl he was carrying down on Simon’s med bed and bark at Simon to look after her before disappearing into his bunk. Wasn’t like the cap’n to disappear like that, no explanation or nothing. Hardly a word to no one. Didn’t even seem to care about the cargo.

“You think she’ll make it?” Kaylee glanced up to see Jayne leaning against the infirmary window next to her. He bit into the green apple he was holding, staring in at the woman on the table as he chewed with his mouth open.

“Simon’s zhen de shi tian cai when it comes to fixin’ people. He’ll get her better,” Kaylee replied, nodding firmly. “Won’t he?”

“She’s tore up pretty bad. Shepherd’s in the kitchen prayin’. Wonder who she is. Who did that to her. Don’t seem to be no mystery to Mal though.”

“What? No. But why wouldn’t he tell us about her?” Jayne shrugged.

“D

Comments
Wednesday, 03 January 2007 11:53
O-kay, so the mystery slowly unravels. I'm thinking though that the crew should have gone with Jayne's first impulse and got the good gorram off that rock as soon as they had the woman on board. Now they're stuck and those evil *wangba dans* are searching for her. Really great story, can't wait for more! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 04 January 2007 08:27
Hoo boy...this ain't good. Mal's just rescued an badly injured ex-girlfriend and the Alliance is now after her...and another prisoner. Makes for some future moments of tension, eh Uncomprehending?

;)

BEB
Friday, 05 January 2007 06:04
Wow, nice build of the tension. I had a feeling the woman would be an old love of Mal's, but I really like how you built the suspense to get to the moment.

Can't wait to read more - and why do I have a feeling Stephanie was wrongly imprisoned?
Friday, 05 January 2007 16:15
Rightly or wrongly imprisoned, I could see something like this turning up in the series - like Tracey. It really would be Mal's luck.
Sunday, 18 February 2007 00:03
Wow, good fic! :scurries off to next chapter:
Friday, 16 March 2007 07:20
omg! how did you do that with mal and book? that was such an authentic interaction between them! wow!

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