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Serenity Inc., chapter something something

Tuesday, May 27, 2003

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There were real doctors in the hastily erected MASH unit in Lisskin. Drop some Reavers on an Alliance post, and miracles can happen. Cafferty did more time playing nurse than doctor, and when he could he kept his eyes open to learn real, honest doctoring.

Keeping his eyes open after the fourth day was getting to be a real challenge. He had access to some particularly effective stimulants from the medical locker, but he didn't like the way they made his hands shake when combined with the dosages he'd already taken.

Jian-Ku's lower arm had been taken off, and Kellerman was inconsolable. His friend had thrown himself into clearing up the wreckage and was about to fall on his face from exhaustion himself.

The townsfolk had gotten off more lightly than the Alliance post. The base itself was a total loss, no survivors. Miloslaw's gathering a few militia together had allowed a scant number of regulars to escape the slaughter on the plain.

The most humbling part had been realizing how easily the Reavers could have rolled right over the town if they wanted.

"The post was their prime target," Miloslaw had told him later. "They just wanted to draw the defenders away from the walls. They don't think like us. They were willing to take a couple of hundred casualties or more in order to stage a diversion. I think that they wanted the whole area, post and town. But the town was just the icing on the cake."

Miloslaw looked like hell. He had done everything he could to defeat a superior opponent, only to be humbled by the fact that they could have come right in and killed every last person in Lisskin if they so desired.

He wasn't exactly popular with the locals, either. Some had remarked grudgingly that he had done what had to be done at the first battle, and that was about the best he'd get.

The Alliance had deployed a battalion of Marines to the area along with the medical unit. Typical enough, they had sent in the reinforcements long after they were needed, but the Marines were at least maki

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ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 27 May 2003 18:07
BC

Yeah, life and death are really the only constants in the human condition. Everything else is transient. It takes some of us a long time to realize that and others not so long and fighting a war is a good way, I suppose to learn that lesson.
And you never know if given a few weeks Caffrey might take a chance. Like Jian-Ku said he is a good man and sometimes there's not enough of them around.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 28 May 2003 02:46
I like that you didn't take the easy way out there at the end. On the other hand, one of my favorite authors has a saying "All true wealth is biological."
It was the right thing to do, though.
Wednesday, 28 May 2003 08:31
Cafferty is a deeply conflicted individual, a basically good natured humanitarian with a darker side to him. Part of that darkness it might well have always been there, and his time in the war fed and nurtured it. He is capable of ruthless decisiveness when needed, but he has the mindset and cultural training that says such things are not just wrong, but practically evil. So when looking at his own motivations, he tends to assume that any desire or goal on his part is inherently suspect. He goes through life punishing himself for his inability to fix the entire 'verse and his inability to purge what he views as an unacceptable demon in his soul.
Starting out with the assumption that there is something fundamentally wrong with you makes it damn near impossible to accept the prospect of a relationship, and pretty much insures that anything you get into won't be a healthy one.
So we're all hoping the boy will grow out of it someday and get on with his life.

As for what's coming for Yinna and Cafferty, well, who knows? (Besides me. Heh.)
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 28 May 2003 18:59
Excellent twist with this storyline. I didn't really want to read it at first since it didn't include my favorite characters from Serenity, but you have done an excellent job of capturing my interest and holding it all the way through. The imagery you created was excellent, I felt I could see what was going on and some of the horror that is war. Excellent!

Montesa
Wednesday, 28 May 2003 22:13
I've always felt that my descriptive imagery was the weakest part of my writing, so it's good to hear that I did manage to get enough of it done for this series to capture your interest. Thank you.
Thursday, 29 May 2003 16:42
Doesn't ring true to me that Cafferty is ready to stop there on that planet. Not with how you left him last story. Or maybe I'm struggling too hard to fit him into a "Mal" mold when it's clearly not the case. To what extent does Cafferty's drive to be (to find, to make) home interfere with his (unrealized?) drive to be free? We could say that Mal is always free and always home-- ain't ever under the heel of nobody, except himself. And I think that his own heel weighs heavy most days. To what extent does that infringe on his freedom, or sense thereof, and will Cafferty find that genuine freedom is impossible and one can only strive to achieve the greatest amount of liberty possible?
Friday, 30 May 2003 01:54
Mal ran away. I love the character and all, but let's be honest. He threw his hands up, said 'Rut it!' and decided to go out on his own, taking only those who were willing to come with him.

Cafferty follows a different path. His whole mindset consists of service to others, a theme explored a bit in the next story. He lives under his own heel as well, far heavier than any they could really put on him.
Friday, 30 May 2003 05:27
And the truth is, I can empathize more with Mal than I can with Cafferty. I never had quite the medico mindset he does, the complete and utter inability to give up on a person until they're stone-cold dead. I have a world of respect for the healers, 'cause I never could be one.
Friday, 30 May 2003 11:06
Insomnia working again. I also contend (as we discussed the other night) that most people don't want to use their freedom. They just want the box that contains their life to be roomy enough for comfort, and secure enough from outside threats.

Cafferty could run. He's got medical skills that could be a ticket to just about any place he wants out on the border worlds, or get him into some more formal training back in the Core. He made his free choice to stay in Lisskin with his 'family.' In the process, he's started to adopt the town itself as family.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 30 May 2003 23:34
BC

This is late but there is always the temptation to run from our problems. It takes more courage to get up again after we've been knocked down.
I've said this before family isn't always about blood. It's about people that we care about.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 30 May 2003 23:37
BC

I can empathize with Mal as well. I'd love to be out on the high seas with nothing more than a good crew and tall ship. Strange dream for a woman eh?
Saturday, 31 May 2003 07:23
Seems perfectly normal to me.

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