Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Serenity Inc., chapter something something

Tuesday, May 27, 2003

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This one is coming out fairly rough and unedited. I get kind of wrung out producing this sort of material, and didn't feel particular like going over it too much just yet.

Oh, and sincerest apologies Miss Sarah, but I'm really going to have to claim "Wish I was the Moon Tonight" for Cafferty's song. I think I recall you associating it with Mal in Kaythryn's thread...

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"Here it comes. All cavalry groups, move to support on Perimeter Three." Miloslaw's voice crackled across the line.

Cafferty opened his eyes, having dozed off a few minutes before in the seat of Matthews' hovercar. He had drifted off wondering how much word had gotten around about the massacre at Perimeter Seven. Miloslaw had gambled like crazy that the next area that got hit wouldn't just crumble rather than face fire from their own support. There'd two more probing attacks had hit during the night, neither as large as the first, and they'd managed to hold. Barely, but they'd held. He'd done what he could when Miloslaw had deployed them. The commander himself had entered the field in the last attack, taking his place on the wall with everyone else. There'd been some dangerous looks and muttered threats from the cavalrymen who knew what had happened, but nobody acted on their feelings. Yet.

What Cafferty had come to understand from the way Miloslaw was directing things was that the man wasn't trying to just hold this ground. He wasn't just trying to drive the Reavers off, either. Miloslaw was using every trick in his vast arsenal to kill as many of them as he possibly could. He was trying to destroy the band that had assaulted the town.

Matthews was tired, worn as everyone else. Blood painted the side of his face, from fragments that had sprayed outward when a sand-filled box had exploded next to him. The older man grabbed the comm and pressed the button. "Cavalry acknowledges."

"How long was I out?" Cafferty asked.

"Fifteen minutes." Matthews answered wi

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ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 27 May 2003 17:54
BC

Don't mean to offend but my writing is a more professional bend. But I surely enjoy your story.
They're taking quite a beating but I think they can hold the town and the line. That's part of the healing profession, always there to help no matter the danger. Caffery is more doctor than he knows.
Tuesday, 27 May 2003 18:12
Oh, okay. Well, then write something... professional. ;)

By the way, don't worry about offending me. If ya got something, scream it out to the sky and if somebody tries to kill your opinion, well you just try to kill 'em right back.

Or something like that. Heh.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 27 May 2003 23:34
BC

Already have been in touch with professionals. I'm just waiting to hear from them. I've managed not to let anyone kill my hopes and I'll admit that's its been hard.
Wednesday, 28 May 2003 07:59
That's good. That's strong. Winning is getting up one more time than you're knocked down.

It ain't about style, and some days you just barely get by. But you get by, and that's what counts.
Thursday, 29 May 2003 16:25
Cafferty's tired. Very. And that might make him wish to be the moon. But he's not free. The way you've drawn him, it's evident he's beginning to see the advantage of being free. But he's bound to the Alliance, represented now my Miloslaw, and after this fight is through, there's that fight to go. And he's broken, certainly, but's he holding his heart in his lap? How much has he seen and absorbed? How much left until he is so saturated with pain and rage and hate that there is nothing to do but hold his heart out in front of his, acknowledge the chaos of life and resume wishing?

Which is not to say I'll fight you for it. The more people into Neko Case the better. Just trying to parcel out your theme.

And, I'm peeved at you for hurting Jian-Ku.
Friday, 30 May 2003 01:51
"Chimney falls and lover's blades, thought that I was young. Now I've freezing hands and bloodless veins, as numb as I've become. I'm so tired..."

Very Caff.

So he only gets part of the song. I'll take that.

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