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Onslaught, Part Two

Monday, May 26, 2003

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The story has grown into a three-parter as I was writing it. I'll be back to work on the third installment in a while.

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There's a line that blurs from youth into old age. A person reaches a point where they can look back and remember how stupid, insane, and just plain lucky they were in their younger days. They may still be capable of doing the things they did back then, indeed they may be far more capable than they were then, given the experience they've acquired since. But with the experience comes the experience , and the earnest and entirely logical desire never to revisit some of the dark alleys of one's life.

Cafferty was feeling all at once like he was eight years younger and forty years older as he watched the video feed. They didn't have audio, so the whooping and savage bellowing that seemed to be issuing from the Reavers as they disembarked from their grounded vessel was absent from the raucous scene on the monitor. Every grotesque story he'd ever heard about them was coming to life right on the screen. They looked like what they were, insane savages, multilated, tattooed and pierced. Savages with modern weapons, though, and as Miloslaw had said, possessed of a dangerous cunning. The imaged shifted a bit as Kellerman adjusted the angle of the camera.

The Alliance couldn't provide support, not until they were certain. They had, however, provided a few items, including enough comm units to go around to the various commanders, a full medical kit for his usage, and a few other handy items. They'd even scrounged up a brand-new integrated-sniping system for Jian-Ku, and like any proper soldier she'd bitched about how it was different than the one she'd used during the war, casting her doubts upon the reliability of the 'new' equipment. The question nobody seemed able to answer was what it was doing laying around an administrative post with no assigned snipers to begin with, but that was the military for you. Probably had a death

Comments
Monday, 26 May 2003 01:22
Gorram it! You're gonna make me quit writing I'm so jealous.

Poor Miloslaw.
Monday, 26 May 2003 01:24
You write cheerful and positive stories, Wulfhawk. We can't never have enough of those, brother.
Monday, 26 May 2003 01:27
Besides, this is all your fault. It was reading through your submission for the LRH contest that got me itchin' to pound the keys again.

So sit tight while I sing the entirety of "You're my Inspiration."

Because this is all your own gorram fault.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 26 May 2003 02:05
BC

Geez, friendly fire. The Vikings had a group that they called Beserkers and that's what they did. They went into a village and did whatever they felt like.
You definitely captured the feeling of shock by Allen. Yeah, their hats are muddy but mine is off to you for such a brilliant story.
Monday, 26 May 2003 02:27
When employing artillery, the classical offensive approach involves walking your own people up so close that inevitably they end up taking casualties from it. That allows them to get in among whoever they're attacking while the defenders are still hiding in their holes.

You lose a few in order to save more and get the job done.

War is ugly that way and a whole lot of other ways.

Conversely, Miloslaw lured the Reavers into a position where he knew he could get a lot of them bunched up. Again, sacrifice a few for the good of the whole.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 26 May 2003 04:29
BC

Yes, I see your point and I think we can all agree that war is ugly. And of course a few have to be sacrificed to save the many. That is generally the nature of war. They start out as a reason to protect what is yours.
i.e.-property and ideas. Not right, just the way of the verse. Doubt that will ever change.
I tell you. You guys are making me feel lazy. I've got to get back to my own writing.
Monday, 26 May 2003 22:38
BC- The more the merrier. Write away.
Thursday, 29 May 2003 16:07
I wonder to what extent the degree of humanity left in any given individual determines the health of the civilization and community he or she helps to rebuild after war. In this case, we have ex-Alliance with little and nearly no humanity left in them there to defend a settlement that participated in war enough to have acquired some interesting weapons but not enough to have permanently damaged their sense of self (selves).

How might this translate to Our Intrepid Crew of Serenity? Is Mal a survivor to the point that he has trascended the need for a sense of humanity? His rejection of a "God" concept necessitates he "believe" in humanity, or at least in himself, so as not to be rendered motionless (See 'Bartleby the Scrivener'). Or, is the crew as we see it his replacement for humanity, each bringing a necessary trait to him for his use?
Friday, 30 May 2003 01:46
The overall war missed Lisskin, which wasn't sitting on anything valuable enough to warrant fighting over. However, they sent their sons and daughters off to fight in it.

So it cost them people, and enough of them came back scarred and crippled for the war to have an effect on the culture of the place. But until now, war never came home.

I would tend to agree with you that the crew has become Mal's substitute for humanity in general. The man is a do-gooder, but he's given up on the 'verse in general. His refrain about 'them as want to be free.' means he's doing this on his terms, in an environment he can control.

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