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Onslaught, Part One

Sunday, May 25, 2003

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3303    RATING: 7.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Cafferty was nursing a massive hangover when Miloslaw knocked at the doorframe and stepped into the back office. He looked at the ex-Pathfinder briefly, then looked again. Miloslaw was in uniform, Fleet Regular, Class 2 grays. Cafferty glared.

"That's not a suit you want to be wearing around here just now," he said, shifting cautiously in his broken chair. The loud squeak from the chair cut through his head like a hammer and didn't help to improve his humor any. They were burying Zip today, and he right now he was about as fond of Alliance regulars as the locals.

Miloslaw didn't respond to the shot, instead pulling a piece of paper from his pocket. "Corpsman Kevin Joseph Cafferty, you are hereby returned to active duty status, blah blah blah, lawful orders blah blah, best of your ability blah blah, articles and codes so on and so forth for the duration of the present emergency," he finished, looking at Cafferty with a stone-cold expression.

"What..." Cafferty said, rubbing his head.

"Welcome back to the life," Miloslaw said. "We've got a problem. Reavers."

Cafferty's blood ran cold. Shaking off the cobwebs, he stood up. "Coming here?"

"This is the best target on the planet. Enough material laying around to be worthy of hitting, not defended like the capital," Miloslaw said. "We've got maybe six, seven hours to get this town ready to defend itself, with what help the administrative post down the road can give us. They can field about a platoon of effectives, and sundry and assorted desk-jockeys who haven't fired a shot since they qualified in training."

Cafferty was staring at Miloslaw's insignia and decorations. It was ostentation by understatement. The only decorations Miloslaw wore was his combat infantry badge, an orbital drop qualification badge, and a gold/red wound medal that indicated he'd been wounded three times in the line of duty. His eyes went once again to the rank tabs on the man's shoulders.

"Sergeant major? You're a sergeant major?" he said, impressed despite

Comments
Sunday, 25 May 2003 18:10
chills, I got chills...
Sunday, 25 May 2003 20:13
Then I must've done something right.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 25 May 2003 21:46
BC

Now it sounds like the Old West. The whole town coming together to protect itself from a gang of bandits, which is what the Reavers are.
People defending themselves. Some pretty amazing parallels.
Ride 'em cowboy. Can't wait to see who comes out alive.
Women did everything in the Old West because they had to and we still do today.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 25 May 2003 23:13
I see your chills, and raise you shivers. You did all sorts of things right. *sigh* You just had to end on a cliffhanger, didn't you?
Sunday, 25 May 2003 23:47
BC- Yeah, that's what I was talking about before how this material does a lot of its own writing if you know some history.
What can I say? Without women the species wouldn't have gotten very far, and life wouldn't have been worth much even if it had. Seriously, women of course have a broad historical role, and part of my portrayal here is intended to depict the inconsistencies of a frontier society where population base is vital and women are expected to breed 'em out as fast as they can in order to get colonies up to survivable levels, as opposed to modern expectations for their role. This space western genre is a playground to explore any number of ideas and themes. Jian-Ku and Yinna are determining their own paths in life, and everyone else is having to deal with it as they can.

The sequel is half-written right now. I've had a couple of things throw me off stride, i.e., going to the store for some smokes and getting drawn into a friendly discussion on the various aspects of the astrological signs, and the family called a bit back. I have to dig this stuff out of a deep dark place to make it plausible, so I'm taking a bit of a break to get back into the mindset. It should be done by the end of the night and probably a bit sooner. Thanks all.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 26 May 2003 00:23
BC

Goes without saying that without men life would be boring and of course that was and is expected of women to this day.
Every woman should look to carve out their own destiny with or without the help of a man. Most of us are stronger than we look.
Look forward to reading the rest.
PS. Here's to the guys in the white hats. Alliance and Browncoats.
Monday, 26 May 2003 01:18
Women have the subtle strength. Except for the less than subtle ones.

The hats may be a bit muddy after the next episode, I fear.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 27 May 2003 06:19
You have a gift for storytelling. Very cool first chapter and daring to have all new characters. i look forward to reading more.

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