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Unfinished Business -- Chapter Ten

Saturday, December 2, 2006

Jayne wakes up in a good mood, Simon meets a whore, and River continues her experiments with alcohol.

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Unfinished Business

Chapter Ten

“Olfactory . . . Optic . . . Oculomotor . . . Troch-Trochlear . . . Trigeminal, Abducent, Facial . . . Vestibulocochlear . . . Glossopharyngeal . . . um, Vagus . . . Accessory . . . um . . . and . . . um . . .” Heather McKlintock recited from memory, as she dogged Simon’s steps.

“Hippos,” supplied Simon, with a grin.

“Hippos?” Heather asked, an eyebrow raised skeptically.

“Hippos?” Kaylee asked, confused.

“ ‘Hippos’,” Simon repeated. “ ‘Oliver the Optimistic Octopus Trots Triumphantly About Facing Audiences Glossily Vaguely Spinning Hippos’. Hippos is Hypo—”

“Hypoglossal!” the fourteen year old said, smacking her forehead. “I knew that!” She then looked troubled. “But, ‘hippos’?”

“It’s an ancient mnemonic device,” explained Simon. “It helps remember the names of the cranial nerves.”

Heather paused for a moment, and Simon could feel her eyes boring into the back of his head. “You sure you went to a real medical school?” she asked skeptically.

Simon had to laugh at that, and Kaylee did as well. “I wonder, sometimes,” he said with a sigh. “I think I’ve learned more about space medicine in the last three days than in the two semesters I had.”

He had been happy to see Heather McKlintock show up half-way through his shift to begin hers – despite her youth, she was a ship’s medic, if you wanted to stretch the point, and every ship had to contribute. Simon enjoyed catching up with her on her studies, and in between stitching up fallen drunks and treating the odd bit of drug-induced excesses, he had peppered her relentlessly with questions to ascertain just how much of the material he had sent her had stuck.

He was pleasantly surprised to see just how advanced she had become in such a short time, and how serious she took her studies. He was realizing, slowly, that her zeal was not the altruistic compassion and desire to serve a greater humanity that motivated her, but an almost desperate enthusiasm to prove herself competent in her trade.

Perhaps

Comments
Saturday, 02 December 2006 18:05
Sorry for the long delay -- I've got a lot going on right now.

Screw
Saturday, 02 December 2006 18:36
We always forgive your delays - albeit through gritted teeth ;)

All good as always! Huggy Jayne, weird semi-religious practices, and a tactless River. Shiny.
EPM0001
Saturday, 02 December 2006 20:25
Excellent chapter..this is such an intresting story I can't wait tto read more.
NEILEI
Saturday, 02 December 2006 20:31
This is one of my favorite chapters. Loopy Jayne, disgusted Simon (not mixing biology and theology), amused Kaylee, drunken River and Mal about to kill Duncan. Bet Zoe is there ready to step in if needs be. I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next installment, but we understand the wait; just looking forward to the next one. Shiny holidays to ya!
NeiLei
Saturday, 02 December 2006 22:34
Yeah yoru forgiven at least for a few days till the shakes come back.
Saturday, 02 December 2006 22:57
You're back! And you brought shiny prezzies!

;D

Briliant stuff here, Screw! Definitely loved Jayne being all touchy feely...but what I can't wait for is how you work on his newly skewed personality. Cuz I doubt you have introduced us to the Sisterhood's methods and their effects on people just to let Jayne go through an extended hangover and keep on being a crude asshat;D

Oh...and I can't wait to see Mal's side of things after finding out Duncan was the double-agent...and what happens when River, Rowan, Tinker and Daisy charge in and see Mal trying to throttle Rowan and Tinker's dad;)

BEB
Sunday, 03 December 2006 00:56
God in Heaven, this was funny!

Superb chapter, and well worth the wait!
Sunday, 03 December 2006 13:39
*bwee* Loopy Jayne is fantastic. I hope it takes more than a couple of days to wear off.
SARAH0832
Sunday, 03 December 2006 20:20
Loved huggy, happy Jayne. Can't wait to see what good deeds he has to do. I'm happy to read when ever you post.
Thank you.
Monday, 04 December 2006 02:11
Now that was a chuckle and a half, excellent as always!
Wednesday, 06 December 2006 21:54
You and I both love dialogue, and you're good at it. A chapter of yours is always a good time.

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