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Unfinished Business -- Chapter Eight

Sunday, November 5, 2006

River passes the time in a friendly game of cards. Mal considers his youth.

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Unfinished Business

Chapter Eight

The Black Dog was a sturdy old freighter with a squarish body that could contain thrice the cargo of Serenity, and it squatted on the west side of the mesa like it was a natural feature of the landscape. The gray-green paint that had been applied so long ago was faded by countless atmo entries and hundreds of thousands of hours under the rays of a dozen suns. It was sturdy, of that there was no doubt. It was anything but graceful.

It was also the designated site of a grand old tradition: the Rimworld Independent Pilot’s Association Biannual Reunion Poker Tournament. A hand-written sign on the hatchway advertised the fact, and reiterated that the event was for pilots only. River stared at it doubtfully and twisted her hair, debating whether or not to go in.

“C’mon!” Rowan McKlintock insisted, pulling at her arm. “Uncle Devon is already inside. So’s about everyone else. We gotta go!”

“I don’t actually have any piloting credentials,” River said, a little sulkily. “This is for real pilots.”

“You take her up, you bring her down safe, you are a real pilot,” Rowan insisted rolling her eyes in teenaged frustration. “Hell, at least you’re the primary, and not a co-pilot. They won’t even let me sit in until the second round!”

“Simon wouldn’t approve. Poker’s too easy, anyway,” River said. “I’m sure they—”

“River Tam, quit bein’ so gorram humble an’ shy and get your ass in there!” Rowan urged, teenaged hyperbole coloring every syllable. “You’re a pilot, now. Only way you’re gonna get any respect is to go in there and let ‘em know who you are!”

“Wash should really be the one—”

“Wash ain’t Serenity’s pilot, no more, and that is a damn shame. But you are, an’ you got responsibilities. One of ‘em is to go lose some money to the older pilots an’ prove that you got the balls to swing a stick like any of ‘em. It’s your duty to your ship!”

River still stared at the sign, fidgeting a little more than usual. She was about to turn and head back to the saf

Comments
FIREFLYCRACKHEAD
Sunday, 05 November 2006 07:20
Sweet first comment! I'm loving how river is developing as a coherent self-sufficient person. But what about Jayne? I can't imagine he's not getting into trouble.
Sunday, 05 November 2006 07:31
*L* interasting way that you used my login name. Good story as always, just hope we don;t have to wait as long for the next part.
Sunday, 05 November 2006 13:43
River made me grin in this, I could so see her at that poker game earning her share of kudos from the other pilots. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 06 November 2006 04:50
I'm mentioned in one of Screw's stories. Wow! I feel honoured. Seeing River gain confidence, was really lovely too.
NEILEI
Monday, 06 November 2006 05:55
It was so good to get another chapter. I love River's interaction with Rowan and the continuing story of Mal's youth. Another shiny day. Many thanks.
Monday, 06 November 2006 19:04
Oh this was just brilliant, Screw! Definitely was loving River's shy and humble routine before she ended up owning the game:D

And homemade frag grenades? Now there's something that strikes me as Browncoat initiative;)

Can't wait to see what Jayne is getting up to while Mal's commiserating, Zoe's dreamwalking, River's ruling the gambling roost amongst pilots...and whatever Inara, Simon and Kaylee are up to:)

BEB

P.S. Since you already got some of BSR ladies and gents invovled....any suggested way of getting in on some of the action?

;)
Thursday, 16 November 2006 03:21
Oh for heaven's sakes! I'm one of the lucky ones that didn't stumble onto StA's stuff until just recently... so I was treated to 120 or so uninterrupted chapters. But now I'm caught up and have to wait for new ones. NOOOO!!!!!! :)

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