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Unfinished Business -- Chapter Seven

Saturday, October 28, 2006

Zoe gets a message from Wash from . . . Beyond the Grave (cue spooky music)

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Unfinished Business

Chapter Seven

The night was chilly, though the jovian Gorgon, on the horizon, did radiate a little heat and a bluish light, turning the Outback into an eerie fairy world in front of Zoë. She didn’t feel the chill, though. She had too much liquor and too much rage in her to condescend to a minor inconvenience like chill.

The big man who led her through the desert seemed tireless, his long legs carrying a brisk, constant pace that forced her to take an extra step for every five he took. That didn’t bother her, per se, either. She had slogged through frozen tundra, ankle-deep mud, sand, dust, fertile ground and vitrified urban areas for days, before, often carrying a sixty pound pack, a ten pound rifle, and, occasionally, a wounded comrade. Of course, she had been a younger woman then, and in better shape – shipboard life was not easy, but it did not have the physical exertions the life of an infantry soldier forced upon you.

Despite all of that, Zoë was getting tired . . . and pissed.

Her first reaction to the wild man had been shock, then outrage at his temerity. She would have accused him of making a joke in the poorest of taste, had not his eyes told her how serious and sane he was about the matter. Zoë would have to be about three times as drunk as she was before she started mistrusting the instincts that had kept her alive all of these years, and her instincts told her that the odd fellow was, indeed, serious and truthful in his claim, despite its apparent absurdity.

What does one do when a wild tribesman approaches you out of the gloom and tells you, first of all, that you are destined to save his brother, and then follows it up by mentioning, almost casually, that he carried a message from your dead husband? You either shot him or took him seriously. So when her weapon didn’t pop out and end him, there was but one choice remaining. When he told her to follow, she did.

Admittedly, she had thought he would merely be leading her to a more private locale in which t

Comments
Saturday, 28 October 2006 05:13
That was certinally diffrent. Interasting and curious whats next as always.
Saturday, 28 October 2006 06:13
I have to ask. I got some shades of "American Gods" in there, with someone named Saturday and the lesser gods moving to the Rim. Are you a Gaiman fan?

I never pegged Zoe for the mystical, epiphany type, but you made it work...even to the point that necrophelia (in a sense) seemed palatable. Nice.
Saturday, 28 October 2006 07:25
Shades of Gaiman?? I'll buy that.. although... her drug induced state has me leaning more toward Castaneda's warrior-traveler..

anyway screw you finally wrote something I like
Saturday, 28 October 2006 12:39
Elements of both, and other stuff as well. "Baron Saturday" is another name for Baron Semedi, because of the Astrological connection between Saturn and Death. But most of it came from six years of studying magico-relgious traditions from around the world in college.

Before it's all said and done, it's gonna get pretty gorram dark. Besides, it's almost Halloween/Samhain, and I was in the mood . . .


Screw
Saturday, 28 October 2006 14:31
Wow. Cool, deep stuff. And Wash as a badly dressed T Rex, and Zoe dressed as a cavewoman. Shiny.
NEILEI
Sunday, 29 October 2006 04:28
Now this chapter was different. Less action and more philosophy. Different to see Zoe with such grief, chemically impaired and on the mental fringe. Loved the Hawaiian shirt on the T-Rex Wash, the fact that River sees him sometimes but doesn't say so and the news that Zoe now has a new mission.

So, I am wondering about their children??? Are we looking at a cloned Wash baby or the introduction of his DNA mixed with Zoe's to have Wash as a parent? Watching this with interest too.

Finally, I wanted to let you know that so far I have finished 45 chapters of TTOLFW and I am truly hooked. Since I am still enjoying my way through TTOLFW I am able to read those chapters between waiting on the new ones you are writing now. I am already dreading the day when I finish because it is such a shiny ride too. Some of my favorite quotes are:

“She’s alive. She’s conscious. She’s alert. But there ain’t no way that girl’s even a noddin’ acquaintance to all right.” Althea Chapter 22

“It’s like a rabid fourteen year-old girl’s imagination just vomited all over the place." Simon Chapter 37

“Need a smoke after that kinda mayhem. That was . . . special.” He looked around at the carnage and destruction he had produced in such a short time, lit his cigar, and gave a little whoop. “Yeah! Hell, yeah! Lookit all that tasty debris! You don’t sic no machine on Mrs. Cobb’s li’l boy now, do you? You do, you get the layin’ t’waste! You get the gorram Hero of Canton an’ the Master o’ Ass, right down your gorram mechanical throats! Yeah! The Ass Master has spoken!” Jayne, Always gotta love Jayne, Chapter 45

Keep the boat flying high!

Sunday, 29 October 2006 18:10
Damn it! Where'd my comments go?!? Oh well...

To be simple and clear:

1) Brilliant stuff, Screw!

2) Loved Zoe's running commentary on her feelings about "Baron Samhedi" and his mystical juu-juu;)

3) Zoe's acid trip was genius, especially with the initial Wash-as-dinosaur and Zoe-as-cavewoman meeting:D

4) Kids? Wow...definitely can't wait to see how you'll pull that concept off!

BEB
Monday, 30 October 2006 01:02
Zoe meeting up with Wash brought tears to my eyes, that was really sweet!
Saturday, 04 November 2006 00:41
StA is a STAR! It's as simple as that! I joined up especially to give my kudos to this amazing series! (Oh, that, and to post my superiorly inferior fic that ought to be appearing in the not-so-near-future...)
As far as I'm concerned, StA, you're work is THE Firefly canon. Full stop. Keep them coming. I am a junkie and you are my dealer... only in not so cheap terms.
Friday, 23 February 2007 12:38
heh - dino wash. it fits.

b
QUIZZICAL
Saturday, 17 March 2007 22:41
So I'm re-reading your fine work here, and I caught something that I missed before. "Mother of my children?" "Have some faith?" Huh. Can't wait to see you work that one out. I know not all women miss their period when pregnant, but Wash seems to imply something more mysterious will happen. Great chapter as usual!

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