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Myth

Thursday, May 22, 2003

When he was eight years old, Wash discovered that he wanted to believe in fairy tales.</

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3370    RATING: 8.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Author's Note: Written for fic challenge #1.

Myth
by Tara O'Shea

The stars were a myth. A fairy tale. He'd never believed in them.

The night sky to him was an endless expanse of grey-blue, the haze reflecting the lights of the streetlamps and buildings back at him. There were no pinpricks in the curtain of his night, to chart a ship by. The stars were as fantastical as giants and been stalks, as unbelievable as unicorns and dragons. As unfathomable as Apollo in his chariot or Asgaard's rainbow bridge.

Until he was eight years old.

His grammar school homeroom class had gone trooping off with Mrs. Nelson and Ms. Kelly—his favourite two teachers—to the planetarium stuck out on the end of a pier into the ocean, where the wind whipped so hard that you were worried you'd blow right off into the swells. They somehow managed to get sixty kids to adhere to the buddy system and not go wandering off through the steel and marble halls. Now, it seemed like a miracle. Back then, it was just routine. For some reason city kids on Demeter were so used to being herded around like cattle that they didn't even seem to notice.

It was a crowded world—one of the early settlements, built up so quick it seemed destined to follow in the wake of Earth-that-was and be burned out and empty long before her sisters and brothers were completely tapped. Wash had always figured that folks just hadn't quite learned their lessons yet, when they'd terraformed and settled on Demeter. That maybe

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 22 May 2003 23:04
Smooth LJc smoother than smooth and most shiny...I love it when you write

Badger
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 22 May 2003 23:40
I'm looking forward to the sequel when Wash sees stars for real....
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 22 May 2003 23:41
BC

I love looking at the stars and space. I can see that big black capturing Wash and making into a pilot. Always wanting to see what's over the next rise.
Your writing is really smooth. Boy, it took me a long time to learn smooth in my writing and I still have problems with it.
Shiny.
Friday, 23 May 2003 12:20
"Smooth" seems to be a key word in reviews but I don't get that. What I got was the jerky, jumpy feelings of an 8 year old who, wonder of wonders, thinks stars don't exist. Then... I think forward to what the 8 year old becomes and I get kinda teary.

ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 24 May 2003 01:57
BC

Smooth means that the story flows easily and it's easy to follow.

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