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Unfinished Business -- Chapter Six

Friday, October 20, 2006

Mal gets a coat. Zoe gets a message.

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Unfinished Business

Chapter Six

All day long the ships dropped out of the sky and filled the remaining spaces along the mesa top, each one spilling another crew – and sometimes passengers – into the Reunion. It had taken on a kind of carnival air, and already there were impromptu contests of various sorts breaking out all over the place. Everything from wrestling to “reactor squeezins” home-brewed spirits were being judged by ad hoc panels, with plenty of encouragement and disparagement being dispensed in equal amounts by the giddy onlookers.

Plenty of locals had come out to enjoy the mix – the Reunion was held in a remote part of the “tribal lands” where subsistence farming, nomadic herding, and hunting and gathering were the main economy. The tribesmen were an eclectic mixture of tribal cultures from Earth That Was, peoples who had held on tenuously to their cultural traditions through the Great Exodus, and had transplanted their own unique cultures to the sparse, dry wilderness of the Muir Outback.

There were plenty of Aborigines, whose ancestors had lived in the original Outback of Old Australia, long ago. There were also remnants of Siberian tribes, Native Americans, Polynesians, Sufi clans, Romany, Central Asians of all types, Maori, Celtic, Germanic, Slavic, Yoruba, and any number of smaller tribes. Either they had survived both the journey from the sacred soil of Earth-That-Was and the intense cultural pressures brought about by the dominant Indo-Chinese and EuroAmerican cultures that had arranged the passage, or they were endeavoring to re-discover – and, when necessary, re-invent – the cultures of their ancestors. They shared a common spiritual ideal, holding the biosphere as inherently sacred, and a common custom for inter-tribal relations, but precious little else. English and Chinese were both spoken freely among them, but only as second and third languages.

The various tribes had set up booths in the interior space of the Reunion, selling all manner of handmade crafts, trink

Comments
Friday, 20 October 2006 20:20
I love the story of the brown coat. Awesome setup, plays along perfectly with Mal.

What's up with Wash now though? Didn't see that one coming.
Friday, 20 October 2006 21:16
Nice chapter but I felt something was missing in the S/K department. You made such a big deal of their arguement and then we see nothing of Simon's apology that got them back together? I was looking forward to that!

Good place to end this chapter. Quite the cliffhanger.
Friday, 20 October 2006 22:10
There is method to my madness. Don't think for a moment that the S/K issue is over.

StA
Saturday, 21 October 2006 00:21
From her husband? Well I got a sneaky suspicion about that and i certianly trust you to tell a interasting story. You proved that two times over already. Look foward to the next part.
NEILEI
Saturday, 21 October 2006 05:24
Oh STA! I just hollered out with glee! I am an Independents minded judge who's decision makin impacts the Browncoats fightin. I'm ready to face the music if Hecht and his bullies try to take their fight to court. Here's hopin those young Browncoats were able to put bullets where they would do the most good and keep the their youthful ideals in full flower for at least awhile.

It is great to have some insight into Mal's initiation into the fight when he is still just a kid rapidly growing into a man. Am lovin the background into what made Mal tick before the battle at Serenity. (Loved his mom too: a brave tigress there for her cub whether or not he needs her.)

Thank you, thank you for your hard work and another chance to stay in the black. In this literary world even when you're takin on purplebellies, the 'verse is very shiny. Accolades for another great read!
Saturday, 21 October 2006 13:06
Nice story about the coat. Loved it.

And looks like Zoe is gettin' a visit from the Baron.
Monday, 23 October 2006 02:13
Well now...gotta admit, Screw...this tale of how Mal got his browncoat is definitely something I could see as "canonical," as Mal wouldn't wear the coat unless it meant something more to him than the cause it had represented;D

And Baron Samedi's coming a callin' to deliver a message, eh? Wonder if Zoe's reaction will be as violent as James Bond's was;)

BEB
Monday, 23 October 2006 04:28
.....are grilling him like a tender piece of St. Bernard....

That was a giggle!

And then, awww Mal's Mum gave him his coat, that was sweeet!
Friday, 23 February 2007 12:08
a message from wash? you have me intrigued...

b

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