Unfinished Business
Chapter Five
“I don’t know why you had to come along,” Simon said, sullenly, as the shuttle took flight, River at the stick.
“Cap’n ain’t about to let his shuttle go wanderin’ off without some . . . responsible supervision,” Kaylee replied, looking out the window. “Don’t take it personal. He wouldn’t let me take it out alone, either.”
They sat in a stony silence as River adjusted her altitude. She wore her ‘piloting’ helmet, with the goggles up, and hadn’t said a word since the other two had entered and strapped in.
They were still fighting.
Kaylee had found some old friends that she barely knew and had gotten thoroughly drunk, stumbling back to Serenity in the meager hours before dawn, incoherent but unmolested. She had protested mightily when River had shaken her awake this morning, but she had promised she would go with her. In truth she was still a bit drunk.
For his part, Simon had taken a few extra shifts in the first aid tent, where he saw to all manner of minor wounds that happen when you mix alcohol, drugs, and heavy equipment together out in the middle of the rugged wilderness – mostly sprains and cuts. He actually enjoyed it more than he thought he would – it was the closest thing to an emergency room he’d seen in a year, and he didn’t have to worry about the Feds coming after him while he practiced medicine. And, of course, the utter lack of paperwork made it professional bliss.
He was surprised at the mixed proficiencies of the other two medics on duty – they had extremely strong clinical skills, but their scientific knowledge was lacking more than he was used to in colleagues. One had been a field medic during the war with a mobile surgical hospital, the other had been a commercial corporate transport medic until he had been caught smuggling narcotics, and had to enter the demimonde. Still, Simon learned a lot about ‘space medicine’, as the two talked shop, telling war stories all night.
He got to bed significantly earlier than Kaylee, and had
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Next chapter: Zoe takes her own trip.
How am I doing?
ScrewtheAlliance
You can't take the sky from me
He did more for her in getting her out of that place and giving her a home than any surgery could hope to accomplish!
More please!
I wince everytime SImon opens his mouth now. I think a lot of us go for the "true love forever" concept with Kaylee, but in here there seems to be the very real chance she'll get fed up with him completely and kick him out the airlock.
And now he has to learn to deal with not being able to fix River. I forsee a rough few chapters for the doctor.
How's Mal doing with his rousing party? For some reason, party-Mal cracks me up.
"Try to stop grieving for the little girl you knew, and start getting to know the young woman who’s here, now."
Love it.
And... Zoe next? Ouch.
But a "looking forward to it" ouch ;)
Love Dr. Shin. You have a fabulous way of creating the most marvellous original characters.
Gotta confess, if the price is Kaylee no longer thinks Simon is so swai in return for getting more of these 3-way fight scenes, then by all means make Simon a lonely man.
As to how you're doing? Pretty damn well, I'd say. Please continue to do so. :)
And thank you Jesus! Simon finally gets clued in by a medical professional that River's been badly fucked with (pardon my obscenity) and she's gotta learn how to deal on her own. No magic surgery...no wonder drug...just time, supportive family and living life the best way she can! Bring on the chapters filled with Simon's slow and hilariously painful coping, Kaylee's frustration and River's countdown to the big 1-8:D
BEB
Simon and Kaylee definitely need to sit down and talk. But no doubt you'll drag out their arguement to keep the tension level high. Every relationship has its highs and lows, and it'll be interesting to see how you resolve this little rift between them.
And . . . well, for the last month or so, she’s been our pilot. I don’t mind telling you, that makes me nervous sometimes.”
“Actually, with her reflexes and cognative abilities, she’s probably the best pilot in the Black already. I’d take it as a good sign. I’d even encourage it. But I won’t lie to you: she’s a wild card. She’ll have quirky little issues and bizarre personality idiosyncrices for years to come.
I can just see River as the best pilot in the black. The Kaylee/Simon/River dialogue was so true to the characters, and I am about as irritated with Simon as they are.
I am enjoying this corner of the 'verse that you have made. Very Shiny - Let's all be bad guys!
I so love your stories.
Or, was that, "The Devil is in the Details"? I forget.
Thanks for the comments. Good ego strokes means more chapters quicker.
Screw
Off that subject, the three-way fight is the shuttle was just plain lovely.
BTW: I thought we HAD the Devil vs. God Re: Details discussion already! It made Book throw up his hands, remember? ;)
he knows it was a saturday? strange boy...and mmm, medical-y stuff. makes my brain do a dance of joy.
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