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Unfinished Business -- Chapter Three

Wednesday, October 11, 2006

Mal makes a deal, reminisces about old times, and Simon considers an outing.

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Unfinished Business

Chapter Three

Except for the bright yellow paisley-patterned sari, Thorvald Larson looked every inch the ancient Viking, from the flowing golden hair and beard to the knotted muscles of his biceps. Of course, Thorvald had never seen an ocean of any sort, but he would have looked perfectly natural on the deck of a longship, peering through the mists at an unsuspecting village. He used his size and overbearing manner as a business advantage, much as his Scandinavian ancestors had, by intimidating – sometimes accidentally – clients and vendors into better deals. Since most of his deals were clandestine, it also kept the number of disagreements to a minimum.

Thorvald ran the warehouse block near the frozen port at Valhalla’s tiny mountainous capital, Bifrost. As such, he also ran the smuggling operations that kept the two Alliance inspectors away from contraband goods. As both of them were brothers-in-law, he had a pretty stable operation, and one utterly without competition. It was all too easy for him to sic his brothers-in-law on them than it was to indulge in using muscle.

Most other men who enjoyed that kind of power in the demimonde would have abused it, gotten greedy and made enemies. Not Thorvald. He liked people, generally, and was expressive and generous to a fault, displaying Scandinavian hospitality with the expansiveness of a Texan. He used that, too, to his business advantage. When smugglers had a good, reliable drop and a ready market, they were more inclined to bring their trade to him, and return if they were well treated. Thorvald would rather make friends than enemies, he declared over and over again during the meeting, and he went out of way to prove it.

“Caviar? My cousin Rori sends me some from New Melbourne, sometimes,”

“Gives me gas,” Mal admitted.

“Then herring – Rori’s wife Linda makes the best pickled herring, you must take some home!” he insisted.

“I’m partial to herring,” agreed Mal, knowing from personal experience that the caviar would

Comments
KITTYKAT26
Wednesday, 11 October 2006 03:28
It bears repeating.. your the best, already wishing for chapter 4! :)
KITTYKAT26
Wednesday, 11 October 2006 03:29
It bears repeating.. your the best, already wishing for chapter 4!
p.s. thanks for the preview :)
Wednesday, 11 October 2006 05:19
great as always, though I think you are going to spoil us pumping these out so fast. Not that i want you to slow down. i just know you can't keep it up.
Wednesday, 11 October 2006 06:50
The Viking implying there's a storm coming brings 'American Gods' to mind.
Wednesday, 11 October 2006 08:52
I am so very much loving this series.

It's refreshing and intruiging to see Mal in his youth. Especially compared to what he is now, it really emphasises the changes he's gone through in his life to become the man he is.

And Simon still trying to fix River..will that boy ever give up? Methinks not, and I hope that little path leads somewhere interesting.

More?


Wednesday, 11 October 2006 16:38
>“A gathering of malcontented veterans and professional criminals getting drunk and high in the middle of a desert. Sounds like a laugh riot.”

Sounds a lot like Burning Man to me. :)

Nice balance of Simon wanting to try and 'cure' River and not having Kaylee fly off the handle at him too badly. Their whole conversation was very well done.
Thursday, 12 October 2006 00:17
Oh to fan the winds of war! I am getting a deep unsettling feeling about what is being stirred up on Shadow and the price the crew or some members of the crew might have to pay for it. As for Simon and Kaylee I liked Kaylee's comment about Simon letting River be River, but sadly in Simon's eyes his sister will always be broken. Not sure he will ever accept that maybe there is no way back, only forward. Whatever he decides I hope he rememebers that River has a right to choose what is done to her. It is after all her decision to make not his. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 14 October 2006 05:20
Well now...that was all manner of exciting! Definitely loved the linkage between Mal's conversation with Thor and his memories of signing up for what eventually became the Shadow chapter of the Independence movement:D

The Simon/Kaylee conversation was interesting though. Actually thought it would be about Zoe's chances of reproducing via a forgotten sample of Wash's DNA or something...but this makes for mighty interesting stuff. Especially if the retired doctor can actually do something significant to heal River's damaged mind. Though I wonder how much brilliantly-written angst this will generate when River finds out about this;)

BEB
Wednesday, 27 December 2006 20:11
geez, all this bowing at the geeklord's feet really does your back in...

b

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