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Unfinished Business -- Chapter Two

Tuesday, October 10, 2006

Notes on Muir, Mal's boyhood, cohabitation, and the heartbreak of menses.

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Unfinished Business

Chapter Two

“Where is Muir?” Simon asked as he spooned out a dollop of brown paste-like protein into his bowl. It was supposed to have the flavor and texture of meatloaf, according to the directions on the packet, but the result was more like wet cardboard lightly flavored with garlic and beef bouillon than actual food.

“Gorgon system,” Mal supplied. “Big 2.1 Jovian planet, moons aplenty. Same system as Ita moon.”

“They’re real nice there,” Kaylee assured him. “And Muir is beautiful – about the only place with real live giant redwood trees – saw ‘em, last time we went through.”

“Buncha gorram freethinkin’ treehuggers, y’ask me,” growled Jayne as he wolfed down the brown substance. “Good beer, though,” he added.

“Muir is actually somewhat special,” Inara interjected, ignoring the mercenary’s comment. “It was settled about the same time as the later Central planets, only way far out from the Core. But unlike most worlds, it wasn’t built by a commercial terraforming company. Instead a private foundation, the Muir foundation, built it as a natural refuge for flora and fauna of Earth-That-Was. The people of Muir regard Nature as the perfect expression of God’s desires, and see Man’s loss of Earth as a divine punishment for lack of good stewardship. So they plan to re-create the old biospheres of Earth-That-Was and try to slide back into a primitive tribal existence.”

“You’ve been there?” Simon asked, surprised.

“No, I just caught a special on CV,” admitted Inara.

Mal chuckled. “Yes, it isn’t likely that the Ambassador would go there. Too much local competition,” he said.

“There is a priestesshood of sacred prostitutes that call Muir home,” explained Inara, blushing slightly. “They see the Companions’ Guild as a betrayal of the Goddess’ gifts, so it is said. There have been . . . incidents. By law, Companions are expressly forbidden to practice their trade there.”

“No honor among whores, I guess,” Mal muttered.

“They ain’t proper whores,” complained Jayn

Comments
Tuesday, 10 October 2006 17:36
The description of Muir was wonderful.

Nicely done chapter. I love the conversation between Simon and Kaylee. It's nice to see him a bit hesitant, and still a bit boobish, but still retaining a bit of that personality/demeanor that he had in the film.

Kaylee was a bit mean to him, I thought, when he didn't catch the period means not pregnant thing right away.

And Simon's conversation with Jayne was just perfect. The suggestion that S/K break up while they're on the planet because of all the different delights one can sample was so crude and remarkably Jayne. Just something that man would think of. I'm hoping that wasn't a bit of foreshadowing to come.

Tuesday, 10 October 2006 19:32
Great as always, surprised to see another chapter this soon. Delighted just surprised, no River but thats ok. I do hope the McKlintocks show and River and Tinker get a little more time together. Look foward to the next chapter as always.
KITTYKAT26
Tuesday, 10 October 2006 20:11
Jaynes so funny... and crude lol
Tuesday, 10 October 2006 20:19
Brilliance of the highest calibre, as ever. And I love that 'Serenity Tales' thing too, ta muchly for pointing us that way.

I hope Simon has something really good up his sleeve, however great-read-but-terrible Zoe's realisation was :(
Tuesday, 10 October 2006 22:15
Mmmm, I have a feeling of reservation about the wonderful Land of Muir. That 'Reunion' is hardly like to simply be folks talking over old times or celebrating founder's day. I think they're up to something and that's why they want Mal. Hope I'm wrong. Loved Jayne with his one track mind missing Simon's more subtle digs. And just what the good gorram has the good doctor remembered? And Kaylee, so anxious to hog tie Simon to her bunk then getting panicky at the thought she just might scare him off. Poor Zoe, I hope there is some help on the horizon soon. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 14 October 2006 05:02
Oh Jayne...the man basically can't think without his diao invovled in the discussion and the best Simon-being-sarcastic bits just go right by him;D

Really feeling for Zoe right now, though. Learning that she's not got a mini Wash in the ol' oven must have pushed her right to the very edge of sanity. Though I would be concerned any offspring would suffer from Foetal Alcohol Syndrome from all the booze she's been knocking back:(

And I too think it was kind of harsh Kaylee and Zoe dumped on Simon cuz he didn't associate something like Zoe's first period post-BDM with knowing she will never have a child with Wash. The man's a trauma surgeon, in his mid-20s and a guy. That makes for a whole lot of non-comprehension;)

BEB
Sunday, 24 December 2006 22:30
poor zoe...*hugs*

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