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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Ninety

Sunday, September 10, 2006

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Ninety

“Well, whatdyaknow?” Wash said to himself with a grin as the comm. console beeped pleasantly. “We got cortex back! Kinda,” he added, as he saw the link was tenuous – not enough for full audio-visual real time communication, but enough for a third tier navigation link and data exchange. He punched in Serenity’s access code to establish the link, and saw the welcome screen for Kosmocom Corp. – the owner of the relay – pop up. Unsurprisingly, there were several pending waves for the crew and passengers – Serenity had been off-the-grid for weeks. Wash clapped his hands with glee as he saw a few for himself – the usual threatening letters from his student loan office, a notification that his piloting credentials were three years out of date, and something else, something unusual . . .

“Greetings, Travelers!” he said cheerfully into the intercom. “We’re not back in civilization, yet, but we’re within shoutin’ distance! Just made the link with Kosmocom, synched up, and guess what? You’ve got mail! Check your local terminal for specifics, and happy reading!”

With that, he deleted the student loan and piloting messages, unread. At this point he could quote both of them verbatim, he had read them so often. But that last one, that was new. He settled back and activated it, wondering what the heck Mr. Universe could possibly want with him . . .

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“. . . wanted to drop you a line and let you know about our new satellite location, amigo,” the smooth Latin voice of Jorge Sanchez came from the monitor. Mal was in his quarters when Wash’s message came across, and had wasted no time in checking his mail. There were several waves from business associates and friends, sometimes both. He had been surprised at the wave from Madonna, and worried, at first, that their friends’ little trick with the Relentless had reaped unfortunate consequences. But Jorge’s suave grin betrayed nothing but good news. “My cousin Mannie is opening a shop on Boros, wit

Comments
Sunday, 10 September 2006 02:21
Just the Epilog and the Author's Backward left. And if you missed some of my commentary in the last chapter, it might be worth it to go back and check it out. So what do y'all think? Did I carry it off?

ScrewtheAlliance
DOLL
Sunday, 10 September 2006 04:27
Brilliant. I loved how you tied up some loose ends with the waves to various crew members. Plus introducing Book to Haven and the training house to Inara. You have done a great job transitioning to the movie. I can't wait for the next story, hell it was hard enough to wait for this last chapter. Also, good job explaining Inara's plan, I was looking forward to seeing where that went.

I think you carried it off quite good, I mean quite well.
Sunday, 10 September 2006 11:17
I loved this story, the scope of it.
The grand adventure, the history and the different cultures while keeping it about the people.

I will happily give you money in exchange for words on pages. I hope you will continue to write in the firefly verse, but anything will do.

Oh, and you really need your own website.

FIREFLYCRACKHEAD
Sunday, 10 September 2006 11:59
Are there any post-BDM fics planned? pretty please?
FIREFLYCRACKHEAD
Sunday, 10 September 2006 11:59
Are there any post-BDM fics planned? pretty please?
Sunday, 10 September 2006 12:56
Oh, mais oui!

"Unfinished Business" is my next one. It takes place about a month after the BDM. There's Reavers. Browncoats. Psychological angst. Mutant Space Monkeys. All that kind of stuff.

And I'll have some original stuff up someplace where folk can read it, too.

Details in the Epilogue!

Screw
Sunday, 10 September 2006 16:33
Oh, the gloriousness of it all. With ends tied up, old friends accounted for, and an Empire bought with barely a short fired.

And it's good to see the young Mr Fexive is doing well for himself ;)

Roll on the ends of this and the start of the new and even more shiny adventures of the Serenity crew!
GGCRONO
Sunday, 10 September 2006 16:46
And thus ends what can only be rightly called an epic. I salute you, good sir.
Sunday, 10 September 2006 21:20
I loved how you brought all your subplots together and created so much potential for sequels. So wonderful how you tied it into the BDM and stayed true to character. You are an unbelievably talented author - so glad you're a Browncoat too!
Monday, 11 September 2006 03:10
StA, Once again you carry the mythos of our BDHs to a glorious finish. I have truly enjoyed this series, and look forward to the final wrap-up of the saga.

Shiny as always.

Keep flyin'

K
Monday, 11 September 2006 21:36
"Treasure" and "Kaylee's Lament" are simply great stories. I enjoyed reading them and will enjoy reading them again. Got me hooked on reading fan fiction.

I look foward to reading "Unfinished Business", especially the next time River meets Rel.
Tuesday, 12 September 2006 18:15
Excellent wrap-up for an excellent series. Seriously, you have set the bar for fan fiction, to my mind and I can be satisfied with nothing less than a well-conceived plot and a well-rounded storylines (unless it includes correct grammar, good spelling, that sort of thing).

I really look forward to your future work and hope you'll have your own website where I can sign up for notification by email whenever something you've written is ready for me to devour!

Thanks for extending the life of Firefly far beyond its episodic history and for linking it to the Serenity film.

I appreciate your work!

:-)
LadySage
RANKTYRO
Wednesday, 20 September 2006 03:39
I have to say, (no flattery) you are one of the best science fiction/fantasy writers I have ever had the priveledge and delight to read.

Please keep up the good work, and I wuold like to say,I would gladly pay for any book you wrote.

You Rock.....
Tuesday, 26 September 2006 06:56
Glad to hear there is going to be a new story. Though I just couldn't wait and hopefully soon we will see the final of this one and then the next one starting. But in the mean time I have went back to reread the series starting with Kaylee's Lament. I have been reading your stuff since you first started. Just rarely posted and often as anon when i did. Anyways keep up the good work.
Saturday, 23 December 2006 20:33
"Because,” he said, beaming, “my lovely bride has just informed me that she intends on birthing my heir within the year!”
gaun yersel johnny boy!!! *ahem* touch of the scot in me coming through there.

b
Monday, 22 January 2007 04:25
sniffle and sigh. all sorts of goodness from this thing, im even passing it on to friends.

just to let you know, im seriously considering becoming a taoist monk now :)
BORNTOEARLY
Monday, 04 May 2009 02:42
I loved loved loved this story!!! I read it every chance I got, neglecting many other things in my life! It was so well written, the charecters so spot on, the story compelling...I can't say enough about what a treat it was to read. Thank you for keeping Firefly alive.

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