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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Eighty-Eight

Friday, August 25, 2006

Jayne gets his present . . . and a bill.

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Eighty-Eight

“Forty . . . four . . . million?!” Jayne asked, his eyes the size of saucers. “They traded . . .”

Book nodded, chuckling to himself. As soon as they were safely underway, Jayne had insisted on a cup of coffee, and the Shepherd was happy to keep him company.

“Truth. Want me to swear on a stack of Bibles? I can arrange it.”

“We got paid . . . and they . . . what the hell were they thinking?” he asked, astonished. “I mean, I can see them comin’ in swingin’, guns blazin’, maybe get themselves all killed tryin’ to rescue . . . but to actually pay real coin . . .”

“Don’t look to me for guidance. I knew it was the right thing to do . . . I just didn’t know if the Captain was the right man to do it. A lesser man would’ve headed for the horizon. You got a real friend, there,” Book nodded.

“I can’t believe it! He had that kinda coin, and he blew it . . .”

“On your sorry ass, yes,” Book finished. “I figure you’re about the most expensive two-bit gunman on the Rim, now. Make a good story beside the ‘Hero of Canton’ one. ‘The Forty Million Credit Ass Master,’ maybe they’ll call it.”

“Ya think?” Jayne asked, dazed.

“I can pretty much assure it. ‘Least, that’s how I’ll tell it. You were worth over four million there, for about half a day.”

“I don’t feel no different,” Jayne observed dully.

“Well, then it didn’t really matter, now did it?”

“Jesu—,” Jayne began, then stopped when Book looked up at him sharply. “Goodness, Shepherd,” he corrected, a hint of deliberate sarcasm in his voice. “How can you possibly think that forty million Federal credits doesn’t matter, somehow?”

“Boy, you never had it in your pocket. You’re a free man with your skin intact. Consider that you could have taken a stroll out an airlock, or been extradited to any one of the number of jurisdictions that would like a word for you. Is your life and your freedom worth forty four million?”

“Well, Shepherd, when you put it like that . . .” Jayne said, his voi

Comments
Friday, 25 August 2006 20:38
Only a few more to go!

Thanks for all the kind words. I never run out of a use for kind words.

StA
Friday, 25 August 2006 22:25
Very good, I absolutely loved the dialogue with Jayne, Mal and Book - the teasing over Jayne having to repay part of the enormous bounty to get him free and then the best bit, the present from Johnny. He could not have given Jayne a better parting gift. I am also amazed at just how long this fic is! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 25 August 2006 23:14
Wow. Guns really are the perfect present for Jayne, aren't they?

Love the Book and River bit too.
Saturday, 26 August 2006 00:34
Oh my StA, Jayne is the $40 million Ass Master!! ROTFLMAO!! As always your take on these charaters is brilliant!.... I look forward to the wrap up of the saga.

Keep flyin',

K
Tuesday, 29 August 2006 15:35
Dialogue was excellent as usual and it was good to see a few of the other characters. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Wednesday, 30 August 2006 05:30
Oh...you are completely and utterly brilliant, StA! Definitely could see this chapter being acted out by the cast and guest stars, especially the scenes where Mal is yanking Jayne's chain (of command, perhaps? ;D) about repaying the debt he owes;)

BEB
Tuesday, 19 December 2006 20:29
‘The Forty Million Credit Ass Master’
yup, that's our jayne all right!! getting all teary-eyed over a weapons cache is something i can totally see him doing.

b

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