Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Decisions part (2/2)

Saturday, August 19, 2006

The last half of the story in which, Mal does many good deeds, expensive sparkly rocks get tossed around the cargo bay, Inara does some soul searching and River forces the issue.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2871    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Part 2 ties up the story, for now. Who knows if these characters will pop back into my head and demand to be let out once again.

Here is the link to Chapter 1: http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=12485

Since it discusses kidnapping, I would not read this story to young children.. Maybe PG13.

This story is a sequel to “The Additions” which may help you to recognize a few new faces on Serenity.

Thank you - thank you to Phoenix Rose for the Awesome Beta job.

Comments are ultra shiny. Lets me know if you want more, and/or how I can make future stories better.

Most of all ENJOY -

The Decisions – Part 2

“I need all personnel to the common room, Ma-shong.” Mal’s voice rang throughout the ship. Slowly Zoë, Mal and Sara were joined by all of Serenity’s crew and passengers.

“It seems that Jordas here is not the only youngin’ to have been put in danger and be in need of rescue.” Mal walked over to Jordas and placed his hand on the boy’s shoulder. “Now son, I promised you I would not take you anywhere you didn’t want to go. But I’m not the type to sit around and watch children get stolen, used and thrown away. I aim to go rescue those youngsters. If you want I’ll take you home first, but I do think it would do those kids a world of good to see a familiar face on this boat when we get ‘em aboard.

“You don’t have to decide now, because either way we need your help with the planning. That brings me to why I called this meeting. I am looking for suggestions as to how to get thirty some-odd kids out of the diamond mines in the Luneas Belt.”

“Is that not an Alliance facility?” Simon asked skeptically.

“Most likely a contract facility… Still plenty dangerous though.” Zoë’s voice focused everyone on the job.

“Won’t them tah mah de be pretty perturbed at us walking in and taking all their workers?” Jayne remarked as he casually cleaned under his nails with a knife.

“Alliance contracts would not allow the exploitation of children. My guess is t

Comments
Saturday, 19 August 2006 11:21
Loved this. For once everything actually went smooth! I am shocked, agasp, stunned even. Might never recover. Shiny. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 06 November 2006 22:11
OK so it appeared this time when I opened you story. Just go back to the last Chapter for my review of you work DesertGirl. Hopefully there are plenty more to come!

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