Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Candy

Friday, August 4, 2006

Kaylee's sweet tooth is infectious. Soon the whole crew will be overdosing on sugar...or something else. Sharing is caring!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3438    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Kaylee eats the grape ones first. She loves the slightly chewy, slightly crunchy texture of that first bite, the way the sugar tingles all over her tongue in sweet crystals. She'd separated the colors, and as she eats them she rearranges the remaining ones in bright designs on the chill white table.

She's taking her time with purple-number-seven when Wash wanders in, looking for a packet of tissues.

"Hiding your goodies from the rest of the crew, I see," he says, sternly. "You know, my mother always told me people who don't share their candy with the ship's pilot go to a special hell..."

It's not hard to draw him into the game, and soon he's constructed a fearsome stegosaurus on the table with the little moon-shaped tablets. Kaylee giggles and eats as Wash narrates the sugary dino's tale - but before it's done she's snarfed down the last purples, obliterating Sir Steg's spiky tail.

"Now, that's not fair," whines Wash. "I was just going to tell you how he lost his tail, but you beat me and now I've got nothing. It's hard being an artist, you know. You just destroyed a priceless -"

"WASH!" Mal's voice booms over the comm. "Are you gonna get up here and pilot or are we just gonna float through that approachin' cargo hauler? 'Cause I have a feelin' she's just as solid as she looks..."

"Comin' right up, captain," shouts Wash into the comm.

Wash feigns haughtiness as he leaves. He throws his head back and claims he has better dinos to play with.

Kaylee makes a bright sun out of the yellow, orange and red tablets, using the green ones to draw a smile in the middle. River drifts in - and who really knows why River drifts anywhere - and turns the design into a creeping crab. Kaylee laughs as she tries to pluck the green ones out of the heap and into her mouth as River deftly scuttles her creation around the table.

"Look, you've tossed a yellow one!" squeals Kaylee, tickling River to keep her from swiping the candy away once more.

"No, there were no mistakes," chimes River. "The crab wa

Comments
Friday, 04 August 2006 05:10
Oh this was so sweet. I thought for sure Simon was going to mess it up like he always seems to. But yet again, there are just subtle things you put into the story to make it just flow beautifully.

>Once there, she sits back in her hammock and recalls the sweet explosion of candy in her mouth - and the smooth touch of his hand wrapped around hers. Better than candy.

This is probably my favorite line in the whole fic but there were a lot of good ones.

I hope you keep writing. This was beautiful stuff here.
Friday, 04 August 2006 16:11
--"Are you gonna get up here and pilot or are we just gonna float through that approachin' cargo hauler? 'Cause I have a feelin' she's just as solid as she looks..."--

LOL! That was CLASSIC!

By the time Simon got there and had his first line, I KNEW she'd gotten a hold of pills or something. Oh Kaylee, you naughty little girl.

In any case, that was so absolutely adorable! And I definitely think Kaylee SHOULD let Simon check her over, if for nothing more than where we all know playing doctor leads to...

Great work! Keep it up!
Friday, 04 August 2006 16:47
Hee. I'm with Wanmei, Simon should check Kaylee over verrrry thoroughly...

I've read and enjoyed your other fics on LJ, glad to see you're posting here as well.
Friday, 04 August 2006 20:18
Very cute! I'd like to read more . . .
Sunday, 06 August 2006 07:08
Oh...I think this is even worse than real candy. I mean...imagine the combo of sweeteners and flavouring of candy mixed with vitamins! There's gonna be a whole lot of perky people encased in a metal bug for a while;)

Brilliant stuff here, snarkandtea!

BEB
Tuesday, 08 August 2006 20:14
Very flavorful way of telling a tale.
SHANSHEN
Wednesday, 16 August 2006 22:44
Great story! I read it to my sister, and she loved it too. She says that she was playing it in her head like an episode! Thanks a lot for writing this.
Saturday, 23 September 2006 04:44
Very cute
Tuesday, 06 March 2007 18:53
Aw that was cute!

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