Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Wiles

Sunday, August 20, 2006

Set during the coda of the movie. Mal returns to Serenity after being treated for his wounds in a medacility. It's hard to tell which he's most piqued by - Inara contradicting his orders, or who she's contradicting them with.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2632    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Follow-up to "The Syntax of Things" and 3rd-person POV missing scene from "The Happy Return", although knowledge of either previous story is not necessary.

For ff_friday's 133rd challenge, 100-1000 words about a wish .

Wiles

Inara holds the level, nudging Simon’s shoulder and indicating where the frame of the built-in couch needs to be jammed up a bit. In tedious work, the greatest satisfaction can be found through precision, in a perfectly flush cross-brace, in a coat of paint so even it’s impossible to tell these bulkheads were ever stained with grime and smoke and blood. Inara is already stitching the cushion in her mind, completing the picture of the common room as it existed before a flood of Reavers had ripped through it.

Simon looks up at her and smiles the shwai smile that felled Kaylee.

“I don’t think anyone’s going to roll off it at this angle, Inara. We can’t afford to rebuild it again –”

“Just a little – we could wedge a…”

“Or we could just bolt it in at last and see if anyone can tell the difference.”

“Doctor Tam, I’d never expected you to give up your exacting sensibilities. How very unprofessional.” The playful chide rolls off her tongue so smoothly it could have been a flirt, if it hadn’t passed between these two individuals.

“No, what I’d call unprofessional is a Companion haulin’ wrenches an’ the like when she should be conductin’ her business in the society where she belongs.” The captain’s voice is hoarse but tinged with the flare of his usual wryness. He leans against the portal to the common room, staring at the pair crouched over the handiwork they are so proud of. “I thought I told you to find a place planet-side; you shouldn’t be swimmin’ in our mess.”

“I’m not paying rent,” Inara replies matter-of-factly.

Even Simon looks up in confusion.

“I’m not paying rent,” Inara continues, “And I wish to remain with my possessions in Shuttle One. Therefore, I will be aiding in the reconstruction of Serenity , to earn my keep.”

Comments
AWINDSOR
Sunday, 20 August 2006 17:55
Excellent work. It was a great interpretation of the Simon/Inara dynamic and how they view it compared to how the others do. Also, wonderful Mal/Inara banter/avoiding their feelings. Overall, well done.
GOODDUCK
Monday, 21 August 2006 00:59
I really loved this! I enjoy seeing Inara and Simon together but not romantically, and the portrayal of Mal was fun and terribly endearing. I hope you will do more Mal/Inara on the first days after Miranda!
Monday, 21 August 2006 07:47
This is really quite excellent. I think you really nailed the dynamics of Inara and Simon and the dialogue between Mal and Inara cannot be improved on. Really excellent stuff!
Wednesday, 23 August 2006 22:35
Loved this. I hope you'll write a sequel or make this into a series. Mal and Inara were dead on and the UST was perfection!
Thursday, 24 August 2006 00:08
Oh...the spark is there between Simon and Inara...but it's nothing compare to jet of fire that Mal and Inara make when facing down one another;)

And I gotta admit...could totally believe Mal would ask Inara to keep an eye on Simon. She knows about proper society's manners and Kaylee's personality, so she can guess what will cause Kaylee some consternation and what won't;)

BEB

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