Follow-up to "The Syntax of Things" (http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=12194).
In the grand tradition of title theft, this one originates from the ironically-christened first novel of the Horatio Hornblower series by C. S. Forester. While Forester wouldn't be so optimistic, I like to think of "the happy return" as the shred of hope in a seemingly pyrrhic victory.
This is also my first experience using an online Pinyin translator. I'm very proud of my lu kuai fei shi xi (stupid lump of ape shit).
I'm trying something new and posting this story here before my LJ; it's dedicated to elanor_two, who sent me the Firefly soundtrack as a favor. I appreciate all feedback - please let me know what you think!
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The Happy Return
Serenity Day 2, 2518
I am unaware of this moon’s current calendar date, and I remain unclear on the extent of time I passed in a hospital bed. The crew, struggling with waiting-room hypnosis, appears to be equally vague, so for now, I count my days by my arrival in this ship.
Yesterday I was escorted to Serenity by a nurse and Zoe. Zoe appeared withdrawn, but it early yet to determine if her trauma has left her with any permanent psychological damage. At least I’ve gained some experience in the field over the past year. I chastise myself for not remembering to ask for certain books while in the medical facility. It would have been an excellent opportunity to converse with other professionals on the general subject. I am sure a few of my personal effects are still saleable, and an empathetic intern may have exchanged one of his texts for a discount.
I reread the previous passage and realize with shock that I am thinking like a trader, not a buyer. I have never known an educated man from a Core planet to consider barter as a means to acquire desired materials. I am uncomfortable with the thought that I may become a haggler.
I have seen Kaylee briefly at meals, but have not had a glimpse of her between. Most likel
Gorgeous wording, btw. You captured the characters wonderfully.
Two thumbs up!
It took me a while to get used to the tense and that he was writing in a journal, but when I did, I found myself really enjoying this a lot!
And I was as confused as Simon with what he'd said wrong to Kaylee. I'm glad you explained it!
The hands down best line in this fic was:
>This time she sat me down on the bunk, crawled up beside me and curled around me like I was made to be her pillow. I’m starting to believe I was.
A Simon pillow. I'll have happy dreams tonight!
This was a great fic and I can't wait to read more from you.
You can't take the sky from me
--About Mal: "Serenity does appear to be the best crutch for him."
--"I forgot how to say “hello.” It was a new low for me."
--About Jayne: "his own perception of emotional atmosphere is limited entirely to “brawl.”"
--Inara about Serenity: "She collects the souls she needs."
--"I made a mistake in thinking my sister was worth the fortune I lost to fetch her. The fortune was nothing to begin with."
Too bad Simon can't express himself in conversation as well as he does in this journal entry. Thanks for a great story!
Today I got shot by a Reaver and my sister went all postal on them. Then I ended up in an Alliance hospital..."
This totally makes Jayne's comments in "Safe" both even more hilarious and prophetic;)
Still...gotta love Simon's subconscious jealousy and doubt over his role on Serenity. Guess almost dying at the hands of Reavers can't teach you everything:D
Definitely wonderful work, snarkandtea...though I still gotta wonder if it was truly necessary that ALL of the ladies of Serenity were dumping on Simon after his goof with Kaylee. You'd think they would be used to his missteps by now;)
BEB
Poetic, awesome and sounds just like Kaylee.
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