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Letting Go

Wednesday, April 16, 2003

She was in love with that ship already--he could tell. And you couldn't talk a lick of sense into a girl in love.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4207    RATING: 7.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Author's Note: Thanks to Pearl-o and Dangermom for last minute betaing! Written for fic challenge #1.

Letting Go
by Tara O'Shea

"A job," Ephram Frye repeated, still in shock.

His baby girl—youngest of their brood—had come home from the docks, running pell-mell through the house, her pigtails flying and her dress all askew and her hazel eyes were just shining with wonder. He'd been in his workshop, trying to get his brother Cal's mule up and running for the third time that summer. The old beast was on its last legs, and was held together pretty much with spit and bailing wire. But Cal was family, and you did for family.

"He just up and offered it to me—Oh, Daddy, she's a firefly! An aught-three, a real beauty! I got a look at her engine, and she could use a fair bit of work—"

"What kind of job?" he asked, wary.

"Mechanic."

"That all?"

"Daddy!"

"Man offers a girl a job out of the blue—might be expectin' somethin'."

"Daddy!" Kaylee blushed crimson—and his girl wasn't one to blush easy. "We ain't had work in weeks—and this would be real work. Steady work. I can send part of my cut home to you and Momma. Help out. She's such a pretty ship. If you'd just come out and saw her..."

He set his tools down on the bench, wiping his grimy hands on his coverall, and looked at her.

She was still a baby. Hell, didn't matter that she was close to the age Meg'd been when he'd married her. In his mind's eye, Kaywinnet Lee was still five years old, trailing after him and her brothers to the workshop while her

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 16 April 2003 17:35
Love it.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 16 April 2003 18:21
Reminds me of mine. Daddys can be the most wonderful people in the verse. Shiny.
Wednesday, 16 April 2003 21:25
Shiney! Kaylee is so gorram cute anyway, this just makes her more so. Well done.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 16 April 2003 21:46
aw, that was great! i love your writing!
Thursday, 17 April 2003 00:22
Yup, that's our Kaylee- pig tails and all. Good job, keep the stories comming!
Thursday, 17 April 2003 17:57
so now i gotta keep an eye out for your stuff AND Sarahetc's...shy-NEE!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 19 April 2003 07:54
I am so grateful for your stories, it almost makes up for the fact that "Firefly" tales aren't being produced anymore. Thank you.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 22 April 2003 04:58
thanks guys--glad you're enjoying it! Got a big Kaylee story I'm working on, chock full of her folks. This was just a little scene that didn't quite fit in that one, but I figured could stand on its own...
LJC
Tuesday, 22 April 2003 04:59
okay--weird. I'm logged in as me, but displaying as anonymous. *sigh*

Also, got 3 comment notices via email that never quite made it here... I imagine it's just a weird server glitch....


LJC
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 26 April 2003 19:11
Hey, this is harriet vane, not logging in because I fogot

ANyways, this was soooooo sweet, and I loved you're use of sintax the vinachular (I also forgot how to spell). Very well done all around.
Friday, 16 May 2003 13:47
Very shiny, I like that you got Kaylee's tone right. I can almost picture the scene in my head.

You do such good work...
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 18 June 2003 05:27
I can't wait for your further posts. I was so dismayed by "Firefly's" cancelletion that I have little optimism for future sci-fi projects. I love, however, dirty as it may be, your Simon-Kaylee fiction, since you have picked up the essence of the dharacters and the show. Please keep providing those of us with long memories the travails of love between these two. Thank you.
Wednesday, 07 January 2004 04:45
Mad shiny! Sooo great, keep up the good work! Really felt like a flashback, very Kaylee. Really cheered me up after a terrible day, thanx for that...
ARTI
Wednesday, 09 June 2004 04:09
Really enjoyable! You did a wonderful job writing in these voices.

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