Faolin's Crew
POSTED BY: johnthetheatrefreak
UPDATED: Friday, June 9, 2006 02:18
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In her room, Shanti slaps together the last of her disguise and glances in the cracked mirror over the sink.
Not too shabby. She looks like a respectable, core-world professional woman.
She only hopes Mononoke got that courier license, otherwise, the shuttle team would have a hard time getting to where they need to be.
With the additions to her purse that she'd borrowed from Darren, she thought she was just about ready... with one exception, and it was one of the hardest things to do.
She heads back into the galley and finds Captain Faolin. She ignores his surprise at her appearance, recognizing it as a "well done!"
"Captain, sir, seeing as you and I are going in the front door, I was wondering..." She hesitates, "Am I going to need a weapon?"
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Question: Where do you guys get the personal pictures from? They look preatty cool 
"Remember, always be yourself. Unless you suck."-Joss Whedon
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Darren was in the engine room as always, mentally going over the plan, when he was faced with some nagging questions.
Would he be carrying a weapon?
Would they search him for one?
Would he have to disquise himself?
Darren got up from his chair and headed for the galley to talk with the Captain.
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WWJD: What Would Jayne Do?
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Quote:
Originally posted by Choo1701:
Question: Where do you guys get the personal pictures from?
Quote:
Originally posted by SameErtia:
I make all my characters at http://www.elouai.com doll makers.
Dr. Nagap Luap
(say: Nah-gapp Loo-app)
This is just my Yahoo! mail avatar, but it actually does look a whole hell of a lot like me. I even gave him a Browncoat!
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流口水的婊子和猴子的 笨儿子。
Liou coe shway duh biao-tze huh hoe-tze duh bun ur-tze.
"Stupid son of a drooling whore and a monkey."
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Doc Luap didn't know if his services would be needed once this job was over, but looking around at the crew, he wasn't terribly impressed. Half of them seemed to have no idea what their part in the plan entailed, and the other half... Well, some of them seemed as if they were not the sharpest pencils in the set.
The plan itself was good, he felt. Basic, simple, get in and get out. The simpler they kept it the less there was to go wrong. Now the only thing left to chance was the Human Error factor.
Which of these simpletons is gonna botch it up? he thought to himself. Or perhaps, which will botch it up first?
He smiled and nodded to them as they passed him on their way to the shuttle hatch, and said nothing.
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流口水的婊子和猴子的 笨儿子。
Liou coe shway duh biao-tze huh hoe-tze duh bun ur-tze.
"Stupid son of a drooling whore and a monkey."
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Only Shanti and I will disguise ourselves of of course you nr\eed a firearm the captain ws wearing a respectable shirt and respectable pants. He turned to Mononoke. You got that liscense.
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Shanti takes a deep breath to answer, but Banner is already shoving a pistol into her hand.
"Yah jest squeeze here, darlin. 14 rounds in the clip, one in the chamber."
"I ...errr.." She looks uncertainly at the gun, then holds it up, pointing it at the wall and sighting down it. The captain is busy making sure everyone knows their job, so she just tucks it into her purse, along with the laser cutter, and the pliers. "Right then. Let's rob a bank!"
"Banner, you and Gail are coming up from the ventilation shaft. Doc, Darren, we'll need you in the shuttle."
Shanti glances at Darrens watch. "We should be in the outter vault in thirty minutes. Another ten to get the attendant to let us into the central vault. That give you two forty minutes to get into the maintenance shaft. Once we're in the vault, we'll cut through to the shaft for you."
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I've got to drop out of this. Sorry, but I just don't have the time to dedicate to doing justice to this story. I'm also incredibly sick of composing, foreshadowing, writing dialog, etc. for 20 minutes, just to have the server crash on me and loose my posts over and over again! It’s just more frustration than I’m willing to deal with right now.
If someone else wants to take over the Doc's part, here's his deep, dark secret...
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Oooooppppps! Too late now! You should have read this part before I erased it.
I'll stop in from time to time just to see how the story is progressing. Have fun! Keep it shiny!
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流口水的婊子和猴子的 笨儿子。
Liou coe shway duh biao-tze huh hoe-tze duh bun ur-tze.
"Stupid son of a drooling whore and a monkey."
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Darren was glad he didn't have to dress up. He was also glad that he'd be packing a weapon since he already had his .45 shoved in the back of his waistband.
He said to Shanti "Alrighty then Shanti. We'll be ready and waitin'."
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WWJD: What Would Jayne Do?
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Oh, Paul, wish you didn't have to go! I know the server crashes are getting to me, too. I've taken to writing everything in notepad and then copy & pasting. Your character is fascinating, and I love the background you put together. :( Please come back!
Shanti enters the shuttle with the Captain. The crew would drop them at a public lot a few blocks from the bank. "We'll be on video from the moment we enter the bank. I sure hope Mononoke gets the cameras straightened out!"
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