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Visit to a Weird 'Verse, Re-revisited - Chapter Six

Tuesday, April 25, 2006

Nathan isn't hopping back to the "real world" and it's starting to look like he's not going to...

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Chapter Six

“So why didn’t you fill me in on that masterful plan of mine?” Nathan asked.

Around him the “We’re-Not-Gonna-Kill-Mal-But-We’re-Celebrating-Anyway” party was just getting to the amusing stage where anyone of a sober and conscientious nature had either succumbed to peer pressure or left to hide until it all blew over. About 30 Larkins were doggedly entertaining themselves around the yard. Fresh kegs had been tapped, musicians were playing as if their instruments were on fire (which was, in one case, entirely accurate), and the sporadic dancing had devolved into the rhythmic lurching and vertical foreplay of the determined drunkard. Nathan was sitting at a picnic table with Zoe, Wash, and Simon, who were in various stages of partiness themselves. There was also an unconscious Jake slumped over at the end of the table, nearly covered in paper streamers. Zoe paused with a brimming mug at her lips.

“You just asked me about you and the ex-Jimmy. Never said anything about losing the brain cells had your plan on ‘em,” she said. “Might have been a good thing to bring up about the time you were walking out into an ambush, though.”

“Understandable, really,” Simon said, a bit distracted. There was someone missing and he was trying very hard to appear nonchalant about it. “It’s not like there was a great deal of plan to forget. ‘I’ll walk in and explain and they’ll kill me.’ Must have taken you weeks to get it just right.”

Wash took the mug from Zoe. “You should checked around the bridge, you might have jotted it all down on a bottle cap somewhere.” Zoe laughed deep in her throat and leaned up against him as he drank deeply.

“Hey, I had contingencies. I had a buttload of contingencies, all mapped out and ready to spring at a moment’s notice,” Nathan objected. “What with one thing and another, there was never the proper time to spring anything, that’s all.”

A roar went up from the crowd around the ba

Comments
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 02:26
Oh, man, I'm really sad this one's over! You are such a talented writer, and what an awesome idea! You better keep writing, dong ma?
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 02:42
Wow, this was just great! Thanks for a great ride!
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 02:43
God, what a lame comment, forgive me. But truly, this story was awesome.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 03:10
oh wow, this is one of my favorite fanfic stories EVER. You know what would be really shiny? Visit to a Weirder 'Verse Revisisted: Malcom Reynolds Meets LA. Oh, man, how funny would it be watching him interact with Morena!

Loved this!
~Kaynara
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 03:32
*standing ovation*
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 03:43
That was _very_ good. And yes, "Malcolm Reynolds" comes to LA would be good.
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 03:51
Uh, that "standing ovation" above was from me. Just so you know.

BTW, am I right in thinking that this takes place at *next* year's Flanvention?
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 04:02
I certainly hope so.
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 17:29
That settles it. I'll have to try and get there just to see the hijinks that ensue!
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 17:32
God, this one was so shiny. I absolutely loved it. Nathan as Malcolm was hilarious and everything was just so... damn... perfect. Thank you for making me laugh. A lot!
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 18:57
LOVED IT! Please do more like this!!!!
Mal as Nathan, Adam as Jayne, anyone!!!Love the new series, but this has to be one of my favs. Love ya!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 18:59
Such a brilliant story CABridges.

“—with this emergency Sudoku problem that’s had him paralyzed with fright.." got to remeber that...

And a standing ovation is diserved for this story :D

...goes off looking for a guy called "Jackson" ;)
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 23:43
Oh hells yeah.....this fic rocked mightily:D And he's proabbly just being Canadian....we're all just friendly buggers:P

And yes! Please right more! Especially how Mal reacted to being seen as Nathan. Or a series on how the cast would deal with being in their characters' shoes in a situation kinda like this:D

BEB
Thursday, 27 April 2006 03:57
That's great! I'm sad its over, but glad to see Nathan home. It would be interesting to hear Mal's side of the story, though. Keep it up!!

Morwen
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 05:49
Good writing,young author. Reminds one of Serling. Did you change the ending at the last minute?
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 11 May 2006 02:54
you should only read his weekly column in the Daytona Beach News-Journal if you think this was fun. [grin]
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 15 May 2006 17:35
Very involving and neatly plotted. Very enjoyable. I came over from LiveJounal.

zandra
Saturday, 20 May 2006 14:30
"She watched, shocked, as he used his other hand like an old West gunfighter, slapping the imaginary hammer of his revolver over and over to shoot rapid fire birds at her."
*gigglesnort* woohoo!!!! go nathan! go nathan!! but so sad, it's all over now...

b
Thursday, 25 May 2006 00:16
THis is one of the best fanfics I've read so far. Its got heart, soul and an amazingly talented writer who has really done her research! Im sad to see an end. This was really well written! Maybe there'll be a sequal somewhere in the works? Hmm? *gives puppy dog eyes*
SOLILOQUYGIRL
Sunday, 28 May 2006 08:34
Hopefully you don't mind finding another notice in your inbox about some Browncoat fawning over your series, but I have to say, you really did right with this one. Not only was laughing through it, but I also felt a real closeness both to the characters and our narrator Nathan. What I was really pleased with was how this closeness was also rather removed considering that our narrator was an outside. Your characterization of Nathan and Nathan-cum-Mal were spot on. I gotta say, this was a real pleasure to read.

Wonderful last line by the way.
Sunday, 24 September 2006 13:21
Wonderful! Would love to see the one where Adam gets a mile or several in Jayne's shoes <G>. First off, can he shoot as well <BEG>?


Vera
Friday, 30 November 2012 07:02
One of my favorite fanfics ever! Loved it.
JULE
Monday, 16 April 2018 06:43
Haven’t stopped laughing like a crazy person! Love love love this!

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