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When the Devil Drives - Chapter Three

Thursday, July 6, 2006

The Eavesdown Riots continue, and word of the man who started it all begins to spread.

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Chapter Three – The Man Who Fought Back

It began slowly. Stories like that always do.

When the riot was going on and blood was being spilled no one stopped and pondered over who did what first. Fists were flying, buildings were burning, the cursed soldiers were easy targets everywhere you looked, there were plenty of weapons in the form of bricks and lumber and dad’s old rifle, who had time to chat?

It was hours later, when the temporary barracks the local constables had set up for the additional troops was a blackened hole in the dirt, when smoke rose from a dozen pitched battles, when the soldiers -- the ones that were still alive -- were huddled inside barricaded government buildings, far from the maddened crowds, that was when people had time to wonder..

The soldiers had fought back desperately to contain a maddened populace that outnumbered them many times over. Many of them, them that believed in the dignity of man and the ultimate righteousness of the Alliance’s cause, did their best to calm the situation. They were the ones who had made friends among the citizens of Persephone while they were stationed here, and in more than one situation that respect saved lives. Several were granted safe havens when the rampaging crowds drunk on their own righteousness would have killed any solder outright. One sergeant and his platoon holed up with several local families on the same block and protected them from all attackers, military or civilian. As in every war, big and small, there were stories of heroism and nobility on both sides.

The troops in this mismatched battle without safe retreats or friendly defenders were forced to become more brutal and relentless just to survive. Some ( a small minority, for what it’s worth) had been brutal from the day they arrived; this just gave them license to cut loose what few shreds of decency had survived so long. That didn’t do much for crowd control but such atrocities d

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Thursday, 06 July 2006 09:22
Perfect... exactly how things like that happen, just as you said. Stories like that always do.

I can feel the scope of this, how epic and massive the story will become, and how it will grow with a life of it's own.

Very nice.
Thursday, 06 July 2006 17:37
I briefly explored the idea of Mal being used as a pawn in a possible Independent uprising in one of my fics.

But you've taken that idea, and fleshed it out expertly. I can't wait to see where this is heading.
Thursday, 06 July 2006 20:31
I've purposely avoided reading any flanfic that takes place after the movie because I knew I wanted to write this and didn't want to find out if anyone else had already gone there :)

Of course, after I finish this I'm going on a post-BDM flanfic reading orgy...
Friday, 07 July 2006 07:08
Oh...Mal's gonna be soo freaking pissed when he hears about this...or gets a Jaynestown-style reception and wonders what in the sphincter of Hell is going on now;)

Even funnier part is that the Alliance "description" of the riot's author sounds a whole lot more like Jayne than Mal:D

BEB

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