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Friday, April 14, 2006

I know. I am evil and twisted and wrong, and that I will kick myself for this later (see why inside) Last chapter...Plus the Epilouge, if I decide to post it...Set a few months after my last fic

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2947    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Simon watched the blood flow out of Billy's body, the wound over his tiny heart spewing what little blood he had in him over the priest. Brother Alphaeus groaned and moved a little, head sore after hitting the adobe wall. The Fed, the same fed that had gunned Simon down on Persephone, stood there, trigger happy as ever.

Simon fell to his knees, his ability to do anything other than stare at the body of his newborn son. Then, that grief was swallowed by anger. Then, rage. Then...Simon felt nothing, nothing at all. He was as empty as a hollowed out shell.

And then... and then, Simon felt very, very cold.

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72 HOURS EARLIER

Kaylee lay on the chair in the infirmary, screaming as pain ripped through her body. A phantom labor, the second this week. Simon already knew that she wasn't giving birth now, he just wanted to stop her pain.

Kaylee gripped the bar that was a part of the chair. Simon had learned the first time to not let Kaylee get a hold of your hand when she went through contractions, if you valued the further use of your hand! Simon gently pressed the needle into her skin, and it put a light sedative into her, stopping the contractions. Stopping her pain.

They were on their way to Paquin, where they had contracted with a local Church, the Church of the Apostoles, to deliver Kaylee's child. Kaylee and Simon's child. As it was, they all agreed that Simon shouldn't deliver his own child unless absolutely necessary. And, luckily, this place was cheep, and was experienced at the birthing aspect of sex. Not the other part, though (They had convienlently forgotten to say that Kaylee and Simon weren't married yet, per se)

Simon looked up at the tiny patter of his sister's feet. River came in, and went up to Kaylee. Without a word, she placed her head on Kaylee's bulging stomach. She closed her eyes, and just listened...

After almost five minutes, she looked up, and turned to Simon. "He's afraid.

Comments
Friday, 14 April 2006 22:13
Okay, I think evil might be an understatement! The kid was just burn! AHH!

Poor Kaylee and Simon ... you have to post an epilogue so we can see how they deal. In fact you might have to post two ... will they still get married or will grief tear them apart? What will River do now that she's lost two Billys in her love, both whom she loved?
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 14 April 2006 22:18
You have got to post the epilouge. This was a great and a very very sad story.
Friday, 14 April 2006 22:20
You'll see!!! And, if ya'll is a-lookin' for a stronger word than evil, try...malicious. YEp!!! Sometimes, I scare myself... I ain't like this, where does it come from?!?! I know! Blame the wimpy angel on my left shoulder, and the fact that the devil on my right shoulder has a pitchfork
Saturday, 15 April 2006 04:09
Holy...shit....this is just downright unbelieveable! You have beaten Joss for "most painful death of a loved one in the 'Verse" with little William's murder...and that takes some serious skill:(

Post the epilogue....we need to know how the crew, and the Tams (hopefully including Kaylee) deal with this new loss!

BEB
Saturday, 15 April 2006 05:17
And you call ME evil?

Good god, if you could have seen my face, heard my jaw hit the floor when I read this.

I have to say I didn't see the baby's death coming. sniffle

Yes, post the Epilogue please.
Saturday, 15 April 2006 08:07
That was totally evil killing the baby off like that, poor Simon and poor Kaylee. You could do with spell checking or getting someone to beta for you to tidy up the story so it reads better but this was excellent. Talk about angst, and you say this is nothing like you? That's a relief to hear! - Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 15 April 2006 15:26
You have to ask? God yes, an epilogue. This ending is just too...harsh.

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