Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

Young Love

Sunday, June 10, 2007

As I reckon, my first fic centered on M/I. Do I get a medal?
Mal and Inara have a fight over Simon and Kaylees lil' trysts.
Inspired by scrolling through the M/I Cliches thread

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3943    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Mal looked scathingly on the two that lay draped all over eachother in their respective bunks.

Oh, yes, and the fact that they were both naked except for the thin blanket covering them had absolutely nothing to do with his venting. And the stars were really just Gods' nightlights.

"Gorramit, you two! I try to run a ruttin' ship here, and ya'll go on and rutt about like there's no tomorrow!! I mean, come on !!! Its bad enough, Doc, that you're sis is still all crazy; and, Kaylee, I can personally see that the engine is starting to go on the fritz. When I am the one to see it first, you've obviously not been there to see it to begin with!!! Bad enough that you decided to bed; but must it stop my ship from flyin'? Xiao tian de, how many times must I say it? Work first, play later . Dong ma?"

Kaylee hung her head a bit in shame; everything he had said was true. "Sorry, Cap'n. I'll fix th' engine." She slowly dragged herself out of the bed, letting Mal turn away. Simon sighed, then went about getting dressed as well. Mal had stopped them pre-... well, pre-sexin', so they could afford to wait.

Out of his perephial, Mal saw Inara coming at him, a look of anger barely concealed beneath her false porcelain mask of a face.

" Mal ," she hissed at him. "You had no right to tell them that!! Why must you be so harsh on them?"

"If I ain't harsh, 'Nara, then Serenity suffers for it. Serenity keens and no one answers, well then... we're all in a bit of a bind, dong ma?"

"But, still... Mal, they're only young and in love once..."

Mal looked strangely at her, so much so that she took a step back.

Then, he exploded at her. " In love ?!!? Gorramit, what right do you have to speak to ME about 'Love'? You are a fucking whore !!! You do not love, you please some folk who's Daddy has got deep enough pockets. You have never loved anyone in the 'Verse. Bedded a good portion of the richer ones, but never, never did it but once c

Comments
Sunday, 10 June 2007 05:09
This is GREAT!!! It's so real I can almost see it...Mal saying the wrong thing and Kaylee trying to cheer up the situation....want a sequel ppplllsss
Sunday, 10 June 2007 08:03
Talk about angst. I don't agree that Mal said the wrong thing if as is alluded to in this fix, Kaylee and the Doc have been spending all their time sexing each other instead of doing any work then sooner or later as Captain he would have to step in. And asking all nice and politely would just have got him ignored so he was firm and Kaylee knew he was right to chastise them. All would have then gone back to normal, with Kaylee fixing the engine and her and Simon getting back to their sexing afterwards but no, as always Inara has to butt in. Her angry over reaction then upset the applecart and Kaylee naturally flew to her friend's defence when Mal got too truthsome in return. Now he is painted as the villain of the piece and it seems as if Inara is leaving - again. Running away because the truth cut too close. I would have thought she was stronger than that by now, would have realised that the time to be open and honest with Mal was upon her, especially if this is the last chance to have something of her own with him or let it go. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 10 June 2007 08:22
Quite in contrast to Amdobell, I'm surprised Inara was this mild in her reaction.

It's one thing to be upset about being criticised, it's another to call someone loveless in return and forbid them an opinion on the entirety of a giant human emotion.

Just because Inara is a prostitute says zero about what she has ever felt in life For all Mal knows, she might have been married at some point, considering he knows pretty much nothing about her past. Those aggressive and broad assumptions are the exact definition of loveless to me, so it kind of surprises me that this is treated as some kind of fact and truth, and that Mal doesn't see how attacking her like this was wrong. Inara's a doormat for agreeing with him. She clearly has love in her heart for more than just Mal.
Sunday, 10 June 2007 14:44
This scene in the lives of Mal and Inara is another take on why these two are probably just not gonna happen. Sad, but possibly true, that people can be all kinds of passionate and terribly destructive for each other at the same time.
Sunday, 10 June 2007 19:43
A parody on M/I fanfic cliches! Hilarious!


Since when does Mal say "fucking whore" and Inara give two shits about Simon and Kaylee getting chastised by Mal for not doing their work?

They'd get slapped in the face and publicly humiliated if they worked for her. LOL

Sunday, 10 June 2007 20:06
This is some mighty interesting stuff you got here, Danny...but I really dunno how I feel about it personally.

On the one hand, Mal was right to be all captain-y with Simon and Kaylee. They have proscribed roles on-board Serenity and they have seemingly been neglecting them in favour of their blossoming relationship. Mal wasn't banning them from having something...just making it clear he feels that it's something best left to when they are not occupied with keeping the crew and ship functional...or River from having a bad day.

On the other...Mal's reaction was definitely harsh and Inara let Mal get the blow in a little too easily. Even post-BDM, I can't imagine her letting Mal call her an f-ing whore (or the Mandarin equivalent to avoid FCC censorship;D) without some serious verbal ass-chewing in response. That and Mal's assumption that just because she's a Companion and her job is about providing requested services to clients, she's never been in love? Uh...even unrequited or unconsummated love is still love.

BEB
Monday, 11 June 2007 05:15
I totally agree with BEB. Mal was way out of line. Inara should have slapped him silly and kicked him in the shins. Or slightly higher.
Monday, 11 June 2007 21:38
Geez.
Calm down, folks.
It's just a fic- short and generally pointless.
Thanks to all, but... calm down, ya?

-Danny
Monday, 11 June 2007 21:46
Hey, just be proud you inspire emotion in your readers. Takes skill! *G*

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