Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Saying Sorry: Facing Fears and Righting Wrongs

Thursday, April 13, 2006

YAY!!!!! Next part, I hopes ya'll like it!!! Feedback appreciated, as usual. Flashbacks, cuz, hell, every show needs a few. Simon doesn't like to hurt Kaylee, but he has. So, he goes back and rights all the wrongs he has done to her. THREE CHEERS FOR PSUEDO-FLUFF!!!!!!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3006    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Tears. Tears feel onto his face from high above. His vision was a mite blurry around the edges, but he knew that it was Kaylee. He had made her cry. DAMN! He hated it when she was hurt, and even more so when he was the one who had hurt her!

She read something from a piece of paper, read it aloud to the crew. He couldn't hear her, but he knew the words by heart already. It was a crying shame that he couldn't hear her voice anymore. Voice like some bell, she had. More tears fell on his face, mixing with the blood that came from his mouth. He knew that he had been shot, felt the holes where the little pieces of oblivion hadentered. They was a mite colder than the rest of him. Probably 'cause of the air rushing through them.

More tears. He wanted to wipe them away, but couldn't find the strength, his hand only moved a bit to the left.

He had hurt her many times before this. Hewished that he could just go back and fix it all, make the tears go away. But he was tired. So, very tired. If he just closed his eyes for a minute...

***

The Canton bench was warm against his back, and he felt Kaylee's weight and warmth on top of him. She was like some angel, all warm and peaceful and innocent. She didn't snore. She gently whistled when she slept, making one of the most beautiful noises he had ever heard.

Then, he heard Mal come in. Ol' Cap'n Tightpants hisownself. Simon closed his eyes and pretended to sleep. Mal came over and stood over them, all stoic and silent. He waited there for a good five minutes, while Simon savored having this beauty on top of him. Finally, Mal went and "Harrumph"-ed at them. Kaylee opened her eyes sleepily, finding herself looking into Simon's swai smile. She mumbled something to him then closed her eyes again. Such a deep hazel, so pretty and deep. He loved them.

Mal leaned over them, and put his head near Simon's. "Ya mind tellin' me what transpired here, doc?"

Simon rolled his eyes at the older (and armed) man. "I really

Comments
Thursday, 13 April 2006 18:03
Ohh, at least this was nice and long!

I don't quite understand the flashbacks. Were they what Simon
'wanted' to say but didn't?

Not sure you can tell a woman is pregnant at 2 months by looking at her stomach, tho'.

You know I love angst, shoulda made us suffer more. laugh
Thursday, 13 April 2006 18:07
Once again, excellent work. If only Simon could speak aloud as well as he does in retrospect.

Keep up the good work,
-goblueguy
Thursday, 13 April 2006 19:35
yay, I like this one. Cute at the end when Kaylee holds up the ring.
Thursday, 13 April 2006 20:52
Loved this! Thank God Simon survived! And I love the idea that Kaylee wouldn't leave him - and I really liked the flashbacks where Simon tried to correct himself. That was cute and heartfelt and such great Simon!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 13 April 2006 21:01
Very well done! I think that the only way wouldn't screw up a proposal, even a written one, would be to not be awake when he did it. It's kind of harsh that he had to be shot to have it happen, but Joss would probably do something like that, anyway.

Write more!!
Thursday, 13 April 2006 21:49
Yeah, they were what he wanted to say, but didn't. He's such a boob! And Kaylee TOLD him that she was pregnant, and he noticed a bump on her stomach.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 14 April 2006 02:10
Well, aside from needing a beta for some spelling and grammatical errors, the story itself was good!
Friday, 14 April 2006 07:51
Nice little piece of fic, Alliethorn7;)

The hindsight scenes were rather interesting, thought I would have thought Simon a little more....active in rewriting how things went on those three occasions.

BEB

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