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Thursday, April 13, 2006

NOT A PART OF MY BIG GORRAMSERIES!!!!! I go ttired of the angsty stuff, and figured, hey, why not write a poem? About Simon...God, I need help...soon!!!

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Two lives have torn me in two,

And left me wanting for both of you,

One stole my heart and the other my soul,

And, together or apart, they've taken their toll.

One is Kaylee, the mechanic I trust,

And, with her smile, she's taken my heart, my love and my lust,

And she has me wrapped firmly 'round her finger,

And it is she alone what has made me here linger.

The other is River, she's taken my soul,

I saved her from demons, but they won't let her go,

And I want to help her, I really do,

But all that there is I cannot use,

One's stolen my heart, and the other my soul,

And together or apart they've taken their toll.

But that is not the end of this tale that I've told,

It's only the beginning, now it all can unfold.

I once called the hospital home, and I saved lives 'twixt table and tome.

Now, it seems, forever more I will roam,

To find my serenity, and the place I'll call home.

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Thursday, 13 April 2006 15:10
You do not need help. You do need to continue writing, though I understand how angst can wear one down.

Keep up the excellent work,

-goblueguy
Thursday, 13 April 2006 15:17
Yeah, thanks. Your right, angst is great for writing, but it wears on a fella. Thanks again, to all ya'll
Thursday, 13 April 2006 15:31
I completely understand the angst taking its toll. I'm feeling the same way with my writing right now.

This was very nice.

But, yes, please get back to your series soon!
Saturday, 24 June 2006 14:13
it captures simon so perfectly, you done good! now get back to angsting it up!!!

b

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