Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Saying Sorry: Broken Promises and Broken Bodies

Wednesday, April 12, 2006

Simon gets hurt...need I say more? Long-ish, but I have a lot a time to write this, so bear with me here. Simon ALMOST proposes to Kaylee, and Cassandra gets a "present" from Kaylee and River

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River giggled to herself as she flew Serenity. She had a secret! And what a big one it was!!! But, then, she usually had several secrets floating around her head. But, still, this was a big secret!

Of course, Simon had a rather large secret, too, hidden in his pocket. But, this one was Simon and Kaylee's secret! And, it was in Kaylee right now! Growing, by the hour gaining size to it. She couldn't tell what it was yet. That was only a few days off.

She languidly flew Serenity toward Persephone. It hung in front of her, a majestic jewel in the vasty nothingness that was most of the 'verse. Mal had been waved by Badger, who finally had a job for them. HAH!!! Probably had been screwing up his courage to ask for the "Great Hero's" and the "Evil Liars" that they were known as, depending on who you believed. Namely, the Parliament or the average Joe who had heard the Miranida wave. Well, it was an offer he couldn't refuse. It was the first job they had had since Chang. And Ptah. And Billy...

NO!!!! She couldn't let her thoughts stray to that! If she did, her grief would overwhelm her. Instead, she focoused on the two events that were of intrest to her. One was Cassandra, going into her room. Where her and Kaylee's little 'gift' for that hwoon-danh. Nothing much, just a little oil from a busted line, set off by a pressure tap on the ladder. She grinned to herself. Okay, a lot of oil!

The other was Mal. Knocking on Inara's shuttle door. He didn't intend for it to happen. But nothing ever goes according to plan!!!

***

She heard a knock on her shuttle door, and said, "come in!" out of habit. Nothing strange about that, it was probably Kaylee come to speak about some new conquest with Simon. Or, on the other end of the spectrum, her nefarious revenge on Cassandra.

So, when Mal came in and just stood there, staring at her...was that... shyly !!! Yes, it was. So, mister confidence his own self was feeling a mite shy aro

Comments
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 17:27
Holy cow....those 7 bullets emptied into him had better be superficial or there is no way he's going to live through it. HE's the doctor, after all...who is going to heal him?

Loved the note. Made me a bit teary!

Is Simon conscious when Kaylee admits she is pregnant to Inara? Is he when she's reading the note? You don't say.

If he is, it would be nice to see his reaction to Kaylee's announcement.
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 17:28
Get him to a hospital!!!! OMG, I don't think I can take Simon almost dying, again! Can't wait for your next post!
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 17:59
Yeah, hes concious. Oh, hes in lots of pain, he is. Next one should swing 'round tomorrow. Stay shiny, ya'll
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 19:20
Gorrammit, you must really not like Simon! But, Jayne was dismissive of the guns, which means they probably wouldn't do much... to a tank. Crap, Simon really is screwed!
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 21:36
Actually, I love the whole Silee thing...I just LOVE puttin' Joss's people through all sorts of wierd stuff!
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 22:57
Uh....so you like angsty Silee, huh? Cuz while you seem to want to put the two crazy kids together, you keep thowing some mighty interesting obstacles in the way!

Still...I wanna see how things pan out;)

BEB

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