Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Thrice Cursed, Thrice Blessed (3/3)

Tuesday, April 11, 2006

Can Simon save his and Kaylees relationship? What will happen to that piece of fei hua, Cassandra? And, where the Hell was River in all this? Love, tension, threats, and R rated Hawtness all in one story!!!!!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2476    RATING: 8.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Just follow the sobbing. That was a philosiphy that he had learned, early on, meant that someone (usually, him), was in some deep go-se. But, luckily, he could see a slim ray of hope to end her pain. He found Kaylee in the corridor, not far from where he had left that Aryan hussy.

Her body was racked by sobs, and it hurt to see her sad. In pain, all because of him. No, not him. Cassandra. He thought images of her in some rather painful, and compromising, posistions (in front of Jayne), hoping his psychic sister would catch them. And hurt that bitch for hurting his beloved.

He reached out a hand for her, and touched her shoulder. "Kaylee, xin gan, I-"

She moved forward slowly. "Why don't you and your 'true love' go back to kissing?" She said bitterly.

***

She watched as Simon left. Ah, well, there were other fish in the sea. So what if this particular rich doctor had gotten away? There were other men with taste for her...attributes.

"Simon's not rich." From out of the shadows, out stepped River. She stepped toward Cassandra. "Hes not rich," she repeated. "He lost it all when he saved me. But, he's still my brother. And he loves Kaylee, with all his heart. So, I'll thank you, not to hurt them anymore!"

Rivers hand snaked out, and brushed Cassandra's neck. Her entire left side went numb. Pressure points . Cassandra shuddered when the hand lifted.

River smiled. "Oooh...Simon doesn't like what you did. This is from him. And for Kaylee." The psychic advanced on the life-wrecker. Cassandra was too afraid even to scream. Pressure points.

***

NO!!! He would not let this end like this. Not let them end like this!!! He thrust out his hand, grabbed her shoulder. He pulled her back, pulled her into his strong arms. Closer still. He kissed her, before she could do a damn thing. Kissed like...like that first time, on the floor of the engine room, with River overhead, giving her silent consent. But this time, the

Comments
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 19:05
Good explanation of how a Reaver feels, why they do what they do. Very - chilling.

River didn't put a mark on Cassandra. Bwahaha. But put the fear of someone's God into her. Nicely done.

Poor Simon. Now that he's told Kaylee his fears, they can begin to heal.

Looking forward to more.

Only one thing... apostrophies.... Kaylee's, Simon's, Cassandra's, River's....not - Kaylees, Simons, Cassandras, Rivers
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 19:17
Simons name was ripped from Kaylees

Is this a complete sentance? The thought seems incomplete. What was his name ripped from; her lips, her heart, her diary or the tatoo on her tush. :)
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 07:44
Oh yeah....make up sex and psychic ass-kicking....definitely a double bill of fun for all:)

Though I have to back Leiasky and Zucht about the need to edit your work for spelling, grammar and punctuation before submission. There's A-1 stuff here, but it's buried under some fei hua called improper English;)

BEB
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 15:05
Yeah...I'll have ta work on that part of my writin'...oh, and, Zucht, it was lips. Last word musta got lost somewheres...Next 'un comin' soon!!!(I hope)

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