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You bled for me...Part 7

Tuesday, April 4, 2006

Inara's leaving? Oh my!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2712    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Alright, I'll admit it, my muse has abandoned me. So, see this as an interlude before I can write the really kick ass ending that you all deserve. Reviews make it easier to write goodness!! Sorry for taking so long! Enjoy.

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Inara finished packing her silks into the last wooden box, rocked back on her heels, and sighed. The sound echoed forlornly in the empty space, and a shudder shook through her body. The shuttle had been her home for so long...she was losing her sanctuary. And, apparently, her sanity. Pushing herself up to her feet, she shook her head to banish the niggling sense of unease that had been bothering her since she had made her decision to leave.

Why would I want to leave Serenity?

The words came back to haunt her, repeating over and over in her head like some sick chorus until she wanted to scream. Oddly enough, the only time she truly heard any peace from herself was when she was at Mal's side. She refused to see that as a sign. It would be too dangerous if she did.

Mal. She'd been gone an hour. Every minute from him felt like an eternity, but this was something she had to do...she kicked the wooden box as if to prove her point. Sighing again, she turned from her stacks of boxes and went looking for Jayne.

Inara found the mercenary in the kitchen, rifling through her food locker, of all places.

"Ahem." she coughed delicately. He spun around guiltily, crumbs falling en masse from his lips, open wrapper crinkling in his hand.

"Oh, hi 'Nara," he muttered through a full mouth. Chewing messily, he swallowed with a loud gulped and gave her an angry look. "Dontcha know it's dangerous to sneak up on me? 'Coulda killed ya."

"Somehow I don't think that's possible Jayne, as you're elbow deep in my locker," she shook her head. "My boxes are all packed."

"I'll take 'em down to the cargo bay for ya then," he grunted, wiping his mouth on his arm and shoving the last of her food back into her locker. "Mal woulda let

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 04 April 2006 04:21
I was very happy to see this next chapter up. This is a good story and it was worth the wait. Hope the next chapter comes soon!
Tuesday, 04 April 2006 05:24
Dang it....Mal needs to profess his undying love for Inara ASAP or there's gonna be more CrabbyMal to deal with. Though all the M/I UST is just fun to read:)

Can't wait for the finale here, captainaril;)

BEB
Tuesday, 04 April 2006 09:00
yayness your back! This was goods though kinda 'smallish' still i enjoyed it and i am waiting for the next bit.
Tuesday, 04 April 2006 16:52
I have been loving this series! So, glad there's an update - come on, Mal, don't let us or Inara down. He needs to get off his butt and make some things happen!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 05 April 2006 01:22
Ahhhhh you cant leave me hanging like that!!! Mal best make his move and let Inara know how he feels!!
Wednesday, 05 April 2006 20:23
yay, I've been waiting for you to start writing again!!!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 23 April 2006 23:41
i am despritly hoping that you are going to post the next chapter soon and i think it wold be funny if Mal said somthing about what he found out wile he was in limbo
MCK
Wednesday, 26 April 2006 21:58
Now that is a cliffhanger. You MUST continue. Push through the blockage-your fans need you (your writing).
"Now what's this that's got you so worked up that you gotta go wakin' a man up for?"
gotta love that:)
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 09 May 2006 22:28
hey, it's been days since anything has been added, you finish finals and forget about us here? I'm new to the FF scene, and I'm feeling all on edge waiting for the parts. Bring it!
Sunday, 21 May 2006 01:19
more. more. more. more. more.
wanna see what mal's reactions are to
1. the impending proposal.
2. the baby and zoe
3. inara leaving (don't think so)
4. jayne & river.
COme on. Don;t leave me hanging.
Saturday, 10 June 2006 13:16
"Now what's this that's got you so worked up that you gotta go wakin' a man up for?"
typical mal - inara's pouring her heart out and he makes a joke!! *rolls eyes* tchuh!

b
Thursday, 03 August 2006 15:56
more please i'm loving this series

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