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You bled for me...Part 6

Friday, February 24, 2006

Mal finally gets hit with the "No duh!" stick.

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*cracks a whip* back you beasts, back! here you go, now be satiated until i can come up with an ending! review pleaaaaaaaaaaaase, it makes my day!

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Being dead didn't really leave a body with much to do, Mal realized. Though he wasn't technically dead. Fact was, he was bored.

"So how long does this usually take?" he asked Tracey, who was rummaging through the food lockers in the kitchen. Mal sat at the table, tapping his fingers absently on the worn wood.

"How long's it gonna take to get a simple concept through your thick skull?" he replied, peeling open a protein bar and nibbling on it. Making a face, he threw it back into the locker. "Nope, doesn't even taste good when you're dead."

"Can't I just say that I get it and blah blah blah? I got certain captain-y things I'd rather be doing than sitting here having a tea party with you."

"You've got to feel it, and they need to be certain that you're going to live it as well." Tracey settled for some tea instead. Mal made a face.

"They teach you all this touchy-feely stuff in dead guy school? You certainly didn't live like you're talkin' when you were alive."

"Death teaches you certain lessons Mal. And when you humped life as good as I did, you see how dumb it is to let others make the same mistakes."

"And you don't have a choice in the matter."

"True." Tracey jumped a bit as he burned his tounge on the hot tea.

"How can you burn yourself if you're dead an' all?" Mal asked curiously. "Come to think of it, how can you eat at all?"

"Death is a mystery Cap'n." Tracey grinned.

"Not one I'm too keen on gettin' friendly with."

Zoe entered, apparently as oblivious as everyone else to the two spirits sitting at the table. She poured herself a cup of tea, then continued out the door to the infirmary. Mal stared after her, mouth hanging open. It looked like Zoe had been...crying? That was impossible. She'd never cried in the war. Even after Wash died, she hadn't shed a tear. Had been mighty

Comments
Friday, 24 February 2006 03:29
Well, that was fine! I am definitely having fun with dead Mal. Thanks for whipping off that chapter - just right before bedtime!

I liked Zoe's effect on Mal - very good that one.

Thanks.

P.S. No Inara leaving, no, no, no
LITHAIRIAN
Friday, 24 February 2006 04:20
I think you have something really great here. keep it up!

Lith ;)
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 24 February 2006 06:48
I love this story! I aways get happy when I see you've updated. You have many of the charcters down pat!
I can't wait for the ending.

-kellibus (way too lazy to sign in)
Friday, 24 February 2006 07:02
I LOVE and I do mean LOVE the "No duh!" stick. lol. Please PLEASE update soon, i am waiting! please!....hurry! can't wait! HURRY...

Still waiting love this! hurry! WRITE MORE!
Friday, 24 February 2006 07:23
Hooray! Zoe got through to him and now he can admit how much he loves all of his crew and cares about them, not that he didn't before, but sometimes a fella just needs a nudge in the right direction. Can't wait to see how everyone reacts when he comes back. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 24 February 2006 10:52
Yay! New chapter... you just made my morning (it's morning here). Looking forward to the ending even though I'll be sad when it does finish!
Friday, 24 February 2006 11:36
I've been thinking about Mal's "comeback". I think you could really make a statement with Jayne's response - you know how Joss says that Jayne always says what everyone else wants to say but decorum keeps them from doing it - will he "say" so this time too? You know short, a bit of a "sucker punch" and to the point.

Have fun - you are certainly giving me a lot of enjoyment!

Caper
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 24 February 2006 11:42
Whoo!! No Duh Stick Rules!!!

Syzg
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 24 February 2006 13:38
That was awesome! I love the Mal/Tracey interaction, good work! Can't wait for the next one! :)
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 24 February 2006 21:55
Ahhh awesome!! So glad Mal finally came around! Aww Zoe...and Inara cant leave!!! I MUST READ MOREEEEEE!!! When you get the chance of course, lol
Friday, 24 February 2006 22:10
GAH! NEED MORE! This is great stuff. I'm pumped for the next chapter!
JOY
Thursday, 02 March 2006 07:37
This has been a great series, and could honestly end right there and me be completely happy with it, but i'd love to see how exactly "it's a wonderful life" Mal fares . . .
Wednesday, 08 March 2006 04:16
This is nice! I really like the emotion you have in it.
Wednesday, 15 March 2006 21:09
You need to write an ending to this right quick. I'm going nuts here. By the dates, you wrote this going on a month ago right? I'm getting antsy
Sunday, 02 April 2006 13:17
"I don't suppose that this would be a very good time to tell you Jayne and River are sleeping together."

good as any, i suppose...but gah!!! just get mal back in his gorram body!!! NOW!!!!

b

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