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Who's Playing Who? Part 1

Wednesday, September 13, 2006

Inara decides to join the boy's poker game to extract some revenge...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2373    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Heyyy loyal readers, I'm back! This is my tribute to my weekly poker game, which somehow always reminds me of my facorite 'verse. And yes, eventually my other series will get finished. If anyone would like to help with that, send me a note. Enjoy, and, as always, I'm begging for your reviews.

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Inara stands at the top of Serenity’s gangway, staring at the black water below apprehensively. A chill breeze stirs her ebony curls, making her shiver and wrap her arms around herself more tightly. The thin silk nightgown and robe she wears do nothing to cut the cold. Moonlight glitters on the ripples in the lake, and she shivers again, despite herself.

“Best be getting to it.” A gruff voice says behind her, accompanied by a small shove. Inara grits her teeth, but manages to keep her serene visage intact. Gracefully, she sheds the robe and allows it to pool at her feet in a silken puddle. Another breeze rips by, and she hesitates. There’s a prod again, and she’s standing naked in the moonlight.

An appreciative whistle comes from inside Serenity. “Thought you had gone inside,” the voice growls behind her.

“Ain’t no harm in watchin’.” A deeper one replies.

“Get out.” She hears low grumbling and the sounds of heavy boot treads on steel planking. Then silence.

“Best be jumpin’ soon, kitten. I’ve waited long enough.” The voice says in her ear, warm breath rustling her curls.

Inara prays silently. The only response is the wind stirring up little waves on the surface of the dark water.

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Earlier that evening…

Inara threw down the trashy romance novel Kaylee had lent her with a sigh. Three days out from Beaumonde to whatever backwater Rim world they were planning on scamming next, and she was already bored out of her wits. She had tried calligraphy, napping, meditation and

Comments
Wednesday, 13 September 2006 19:46
Oh yes, this is going to be good. Can't wait to read more.
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Wednesday, 13 September 2006 20:48
OMG.. this is just the strangest thing... For the last week I've been plagued with thoughts of Inara playing Poker - and Texas Hold'em of all things - with Mal and Co... and then here I come and read this!!! Serendipidous???

You must continue! This is gonna be fun!!
Wednesday, 13 September 2006 23:04
Okay, you need to post longer chapters. This was a great teaser but definitely only a teaser. ;)

That said, I love it! Very atmospheric beginning, I could very easily picture the scene in all its weirdly surreal quality. And obviously you have a fair hand at the character voices and dialogues and... the funny! Somehow Simon being held up by nothing but will power (and what will powers he has!) is the best thing. *g*

Now... go forth and post more!
Thursday, 14 September 2006 00:54
Great begining..I'm already a'wonderin'
who that voice could be...please keep going.. need more fic...getting...dizzy...
Thursday, 14 September 2006 06:23
OH GOD YES!!!

Mal is so gonna get his commupance, and no better way to do it than by taking out his allies one by one in a game 'for men'.

Hehehe, I love a little mischief..
Monday, 18 September 2006 22:53
Oh...this is definitely something grand here, captainari! Especially since I wanna know how Inara eventually ends up losing, if she has to take a skinydip in a lake in the middle of the night;)

BEB
Monday, 25 September 2006 23:39
i thought i'd waited long enough for the 'to be continued' to continue!!!
Saturday, 21 July 2007 04:05
This is gonna be sweet! Off to read part 2!

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