Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

You bled for me...Part Trois

Wednesday, February 15, 2006

The continuing drabble on Mal/Inara, this time Mal weighs in.

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Reviews are much appreciated as always, I hope you are enjoying my little ficlet here, and let me know if it gets too weird at any point. Thanks guys!

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Malcom Reynolds was not having his best day ever.

The job had gone south, as they always seemed to these days. He'd give Jayne's best gun just to have one, just one, go their way. Only problem this time was that Inara had insisted on coming along. Shootin' had started, and for the first time his first thought hadn't been for his own pigu, but to protect her. Gorram woman. Hadn't he taken a bullet for her? It was all a bit fuzzy. It'd been instinct, and something told him he'd do it again in a heartbeat. Gorram woman.

He opened his eyes and saw 'Nara crying buckets over his still form on the infirmary bed. Wait, how could he see himself? He wasn't-

"You're not dead." Mal spun around and nearly jumped out of his skin when he saw who spoke.

"Tracey?" He blinked. "What in the sphicter of hell is going on here?"

"Welcome to limbo." Tracey gestured widely with a grin. "Ain't it grand?"

"Limbo, huh. Didn't I shoot you awhile back?" Mal absently scratched the scar behind his right ear. "Doc's apparently got me too doped up."

"You're not drugged," came the correction from the teen perched on the counter. "You're just...stuck."

"Stuck?"

He never heard the answer as what felt like a heavy electrical shock coursed through his body. He wrenched open his eyes (his real eyes this time!) and found Inara kissing him. Deciding to go with it, he closed his eyes again and kissed her back. Suddenly she jerked away, and he cursed to himself for pushing too hard.

"Better not be takin' advantage of me." he coughed.

"Mal-"

"S'not fair to be taking advantage of a man while he's unconcious." Mal joked, squeezing her hand, so small and perfect in his.

"Please. It's not like it hasn't happened before." Confused and hurt at the pain in her voice, he opened his eyes and stared into hers, searching for an answer

Comments
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 20:03
I love this! A little soul searching and realization in his time in limbo may do Mal some good.


"Trying not to look to closely at himself, Mal moved to Inara's side, running a ghostly hand over her damp curls.

"My miracle," he whispered, though no one could hear him. "Sie-Sie, bao bei."

"Time to go," Tracey called, and though Mal fought to stay with her, the world swirled around him and faded to black."

*Sniff sniff* So sweet. But, he'll make it back, right?? *g*
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 20:29
Soul searching indeed...

very nice. oh boy...Mal's in for a world dead-like shenanigans it looks like.
FUNKYINFISHNET
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 21:36
Really enjoying this ficet series. Hope you don't string us along for too long, I want Mal back with his miracle properly soon! Keep it up, you write them real shiny. :- )
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 22:27
Oh, I like this part! Can't resist a good out of body experience, and Tracey is adorably snarky. :)
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 23:31
Very good and is it bad that I thought it fitting that Tracey has to serve out his time in limbo as an errand boy? At least Mal gets to go back to the lady he loves and maybe this time they will both stop dancing around what they really want. Shiny! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
2X2
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 23:35
Where's Mal goin? He's goin' back to his body, right? RIGHT? Gorramit! He can't go off in Limbo land with Inara right there cryin' for him!!

More more more!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 16 February 2006 01:56
Ahh great chapter!! Mal has to go back to his body though!! Cant wait for the next part!!
JOY
Thursday, 16 February 2006 04:19
it's about time someone smacked some lovesense into Mal, figures it would have to be a ghost for him to listen . . . great job keep it up!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 18 February 2006 01:21
Please write more...I love this. I love Inara being Mal's miracle.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 19 February 2006 03:32
holy fucking god mal better have not have died or there will be 20 sharp shooters outside your house tomarow

by the way i love the story and hope to read more ;)
Tuesday, 21 February 2006 06:08
Okay, you defenitley need to post more. I need closure! I mean it's kind of obvious he's got something to live for. So, please continue this story.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 24 February 2006 21:51
Really liked this one a lot
Friday, 03 March 2006 20:22
*prays to the almighty* don't make me come up there!!! 'cause i am gonna seriously get to kickin' your ass, holy-boy!!!

threatening god. interesting tactic.

b

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