Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

The Heart of Her

Sunday, January 26, 2003

Wash proposes.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 6860    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Note: Scathing criticism, welcome. Thanks to Philomel for a helluva beta.

Rated: NC-17 for a little romantic smut

Spoilers: Out of Gas

Disclaimer: Firefly belongs to people not me. Intended for fun, not profit.

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The Heart of Her

“He really will kill you, you know.” Zoë purred as Wash traced delicate designs on her belly and thighs. Wash merely sighed in response, pulling her closer to him. “And if he doesn’t, I will.” She opened her eyes to look into his, which were half-closed, almost dreaming.

“I’m dead either way.” Wash slipped his hand between her legs.

“Yes,” Zoë lifted herself to him.

“Yes, what?” Wash was teasing her, wondering if she would notice to what extent he had calculated their positions to this point. His eyes were wide open, drilling into her now, but hers were smoothly shut with only a tiny furrow between her brows to reveal anything of what she felt.

“Yes, whatever.” Her right arm shot across her body and she grabbed his upper arm. Her fingers dug into his skin. She whimpered softly.

“Yes I better enjoy every second of this cos the minute I hump it, as it were, I’m dead?”

“Not like that, dear,” Zoë sucked in her breath.

“Not like what?”

“Not like,” she arched her back, forcing his hand. “There, like that.”

“Oh.”

“Mmm.”

“So, I was dead. I was dying.”

“There needs to be less talking.” Zoë clutched at more tender parts.

“Okay.” He acquiesced. Their bodies found each other and he made love to her for a short eternity. He clutched at her, struggling to bring her even closer to him. The lights dimmed and the stars passed and, for a time, they were a single soul in Serenity.

“Zoë!” Wash cried out. Her nails dug into his back and she bucked beneath him. “Ancient gods,” he shuddered and clutched her while they both lay panting. Zoë finally moved, half pushing Wash off of her, half sliding out from under him.

“I think you’re bleeding.” She rolled onto her side, holding the red tips of her finger

Comments
Monday, 27 January 2003 00:44
That is so good!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 January 2003 02:30
Yay! NIFTY!!!! God, I lvoe the way you write Wash...
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 January 2003 02:50
nice look at wash and zoe...

and this line:

"Couldn’t find a woman who could understand the land crazy. The feeling it was to look at the sky and then look at the dirt and then go pack your bag."

is poetry. thank you.
Monday, 27 January 2003 05:12
Love the backstory you created for Wash individually and for them as a couple. Great job! Keep writing and posting please and I'll keep reading. :) ~Eleri
Monday, 27 January 2003 05:42
Dear sweet Jesus... I just had an eyegasm from reading this. Especially Wash's feelings for Serenity; I kill for a good fic featuring anyone's feelings towards that faithful old boat. Mostly we get Kaylee's, which is fine and good, but it's shiny to see it from Wash's perspective as well. Love the backstory, love the proposal, love the whole ruttin thing.
Monday, 27 January 2003 18:19
looked and saw another entry from sarahetc. pulled it up without a single thought and was once again not disappointed. far from it.

looking forward to the next!
Tuesday, 28 January 2003 23:05
oh, lordy-lordy-lord.
"eyegasm"? great word.
i'm sittin' here at work and will be smiling to myself for the rest of the 2 hours i'm bound to this desk.
thank you for a really nice story!

Thursday, 30 January 2003 19:39
good work keep'em coming
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 31 January 2003 16:33
Damn fine work, your dialogue is shui, very, very shiny.

Nice action between the characters, and great emotion.

Thursday, 06 February 2003 09:27
WOW, ok I gotta say you were absolutely awesome in the way you stayed so true to the characters. I am a big Wash fan and this piece was just heavenly!

"He clutched her and relaxed for what felt like the first time in his whole life. He felt the pitch of the ship’s voice change slightly. It resolved and locked into place."

That was an awesome line! OK I could quote the entire story, but I think you get the point. I loved it, thanks so much!
Sunday, 04 January 2004 07:39
That was brill, really. Aboslutely amazing. You've got a talent, here. I applaud you.


- Gwendydd
Saturday, 27 March 2004 04:41
Yay! Wonderful, beautiful, shiny! I love the back story; you really have their voices...and I'm sure that that was just the way it was! Thank you!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 02 April 2004 19:08
totally captivating
Wednesday, 07 April 2004 20:42
we needed this.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 22 August 2004 07:06
Agreeing with all the shiniest comments above. You done good, and I hope we see more of the same! A tad tame for an NC17 is my only qualm. I know I've got a gutter mind and am probably in the minority, but....there it is. Beauty job you did, porn-need not withstanding. Thank you for it!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 11 October 2004 00:07
i would like the oppertunity to say awwhttp://www.......i love it! you have their voices down so well i swear i was watching this not reading it. only thing, why was wash bleeding? i could just be having a minor brain moment, but i could not figure out why he was bleeding. other then that confusion, i too was having a continuous "eyegasm" over the greatness that is this story.
Friday, 03 December 2004 10:42
Captain's so gonna freak.

It's interesting that you're tying Wash to Serenity the way that Kaylee obviously is. Your conversations between Wash and Zoe are definitely keepers.

Keep flyin'
BELLONA
Wednesday, 10 August 2005 18:35
YAY!!! GO WASH!!! GO WASH!!! WASH ROCKS!!!

love "eyegasm" - shiny word :o)
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 06 October 2005 01:06
Awesomeness lol Wash that lucky bastard 2 women (Serenity and Zoe)
Saturday, 15 October 2005 03:15
That was a great story.
Friday, 21 October 2005 17:59
Mmm, I'm going back over all the W/Z fic I can find. I can't believe I haven't commented before! (I wonder if you still get these?)

Anyhow, your stuff is excellent.



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Wednesday, 11 January 2006 07:02
All I can say is Awwwwww!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 21 February 2006 17:47
I can't ever get enough Wash and Zoe! I smiled the whole time I was reading this. :)
Sunday, 27 November 2011 04:41
ok zoe and wash dynamc award goes tooooo................ you my friend congratz :)

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