Note: Scathing criticism, welcome. Thanks to Philomel for a helluva beta.
Rated: NC-17 for a little romantic smut
Spoilers: Out of Gas
Disclaimer: Firefly belongs to people not me. Intended for fun, not profit.
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The Heart of Her
“He really will kill you, you know.” Zoë purred as Wash traced delicate designs on her belly and thighs. Wash merely sighed in response, pulling her closer to him. “And if he doesn’t, I will.” She opened her eyes to look into his, which were half-closed, almost dreaming.
“I’m dead either way.” Wash slipped his hand between her legs.
“Yes,” Zoë lifted herself to him.
“Yes, what?” Wash was teasing her, wondering if she would notice to what extent he had calculated their positions to this point. His eyes were wide open, drilling into her now, but hers were smoothly shut with only a tiny furrow between her brows to reveal anything of what she felt.
“Yes, whatever.” Her right arm shot across her body and she grabbed his upper arm. Her fingers dug into his skin. She whimpered softly.
“Yes I better enjoy every second of this cos the minute I hump it, as it were, I’m dead?”
“Not like that, dear,” Zoë sucked in her breath.
“Not like what?”
“Not like,” she arched her back, forcing his hand. “There, like that.”
“Oh.”
“Mmm.”
“So, I was dead. I was dying.”
“There needs to be less talking.” Zoë clutched at more tender parts.
“Okay.” He acquiesced. Their bodies found each other and he made love to her for a short eternity. He clutched at her, struggling to bring her even closer to him. The lights dimmed and the stars passed and, for a time, they were a single soul in Serenity.
“Zoë!” Wash cried out. Her nails dug into his back and she bucked beneath him. “Ancient gods,” he shuddered and clutched her while they both lay panting. Zoë finally moved, half pushing Wash off of her, half sliding out from under him.
“I think you’re bleeding.” She rolled onto her side, holding the red tips of her finger
and this line:
"Couldn’t find a woman who could understand the land crazy. The feeling it was to look at the sky and then look at the dirt and then go pack your bag."
is poetry. thank you.
looking forward to the next!
"eyegasm"? great word.
i'm sittin' here at work and will be smiling to myself for the rest of the 2 hours i'm bound to this desk.
thank you for a really nice story!
Nice action between the characters, and great emotion.
"He clutched her and relaxed for what felt like the first time in his whole life. He felt the pitch of the ship’s voice change slightly. It resolved and locked into place."
That was an awesome line! OK I could quote the entire story, but I think you get the point. I loved it, thanks so much!
- Gwendydd
It's interesting that you're tying Wash to Serenity the way that Kaylee obviously is. Your conversations between Wash and Zoe are definitely keepers.
Keep flyin'
love "eyegasm" - shiny word :o)
Anyhow, your stuff is excellent.
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