Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Odyssey to Ariel: Of omens and Eyebrows

Sunday, March 19, 2006

I told you, heres the 'dark and creepifying' chapter. First signs, and Simon gets some, Kaylee gets more than she bargained for. Very, VERY R, for graphic violence and a bit a lovin' *wink wink*. (AND...no more flashbacks, its a pain in the ass to write!) Comments 'preciated, as usual.

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A raised eyebrow. Just one delicately raised eyebrow was all it had taken to get him hard. Just that one little gesture was all it had taken to get them on the way to their shared bunk.

Now, Simon lay on top of her, sheathed into her, part of her. She groaned as he pushed deeper, deeper...

Her eyes fluttered as she felt herself coming closer. Closer...

Simon had situated himself on her, latched on to that particular part of her neck that drove her crazy when he kissed it, right where neck meets shoulder. He kissed it lovingly. He nipped it a little.

It came so naturally when he just nipped her sensitive skin a little bit harder, drawing a gasp of pleasure from her.

She loved it so much, what could it hurt to just bite it lightly? He did, and she gasped a bit harder, just enough to put her on the edge of orgasm.

He worked into her just a little deeper, just enough...

She gasped alittle harder. She was so close that he could feel it...

They hadn't much time. He decided that it couldn't hurt her more than it it would help her...He bit into her sensitive flesh. His incisor, his canine tooth, broke the skin. A little blood pooled around the break. He licked it off, even as Kaylee gasped out his name.

"SIMON!!!" Delicious.

He licked the blood until it stoped coming. Red life stuck to his lips and teeth staining them red with a little bit of her. It stoped flowing from the wound. No, he must have more!

He bit again, harder still, drawing more of the essence of his love and lover. She gasped again, but this time it was of pain.

And though it pained him so, he quickly dragged himself out of her, a look of horror on his face. "Oh God, Kaylee! I'm sorry, did I hurt you?!?! Here, let me-"

She placed a finger to his lips. "Its nothin'. Really," she said to his still incredulous look. "You jus' got caried away, is all. I'm fine, Simon."

"Okay." But he still bowed his head in shame. But what she didn't see was he licking his lips

Comments
Sunday, 19 March 2006 20:40
Uh oh. Getting worried now. I'm all for a little fun, rough sex but....uh...he's liking the taste of blood which means....oy, I hope I'm wrong.

Kaylee's jealousy is nicely done. Simon ignorant of Cassandra's eyeing him - heh, how - Simon.

Yes, nice dark chapter. But break up Simon and Kaylee and I'll find a way to hunt you down :)
Sunday, 19 March 2006 20:45
Don't worry overmuch, 'kay? I am a Silee nut, afterall (and self a proclaimed one as well). As it is, I think I'll make ya'll squirm a bit more, just for 'peace, prosperity, and sadism'. Love your work by the way, Leiasky
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Monday, 20 March 2006 00:53
Great work. Please post more soon.
Monday, 20 March 2006 10:48
I was surprised when Zoe pulled the trigger, but not half as surprised as that two-timing Allicance loving piece of *fei hua* who sold them out. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 20 March 2006 13:58
Whoa tough Zoe! I'm so wondering what's up with Simon though!

Kaylee shows Inara a bite mark and Inara congratulates her.. too funny!
Monday, 20 March 2006 19:52
>Don't worry overmuch, 'kay? I am a Silee nut, afterall (and self a proclaimed one as well).

*exhales a long, relieved breath*

>As it is, I think I'll make ya'll squirm a bit more, just for 'peace, prosperity, and sadism'.

Hate you. No, really. LOL

No, its ok, when I get around to working on my long fic again (yes, a new one), I'll be sure to remember that everyone loves cliffhanger chapter endings.... :P
Monday, 20 March 2006 20:03
'Course they do! Its very good to love and hate a guy for a bit. Oh, and Mal4prez, check out Going On, part 5, to find out 'bout Simon. LOL!!!
Monday, 20 March 2006 20:13
Oh, Inara congratulated Kaylee about getting Simon to loosen up, not get bit.

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