Initial Treatment for Southdown Abbey Commercial

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(Aerial shot of abbey – Slow zoom in to main building)

Voice-over: “Southdown Abbey”

(Montage – Abbey Scenes: Peaceful Shepherds praying, gardening, reading, doing chores, etc.)

VO: “A peaceful retreat for the man of God who needs some time out of the world.”

(Travel shot – Follows Shepherd Book through docks)

VO: “But our Shepherds are active in day-to-day life too.”

(Montage – Book climbs ramp onto Serenity. Ramp closes. Ship lifts.)

VO:”…even on other planets.”

(Close-up – Bible on wooden lectern)

VO: “Southdown Shepherds are authorized and licensed to perform all Holy functions.”

(Interior shot - Book, with open Bible in hand - two women and a man standing in front of him.)

VO: “Weddings…

Book: ”Do you, John, take Mary and Lucille…Do you, Mary, take Lucille and John…Do you, Lucille,…” (fades to…)

(Exterior shot – Book, with open bible in hand before 5 graves – Jayne standing beside the graves, dirty and leaning on a shovel.)

VO: “Funerals…

Book: “Lord, please receive the souls of these five bandits that we…”

Jayne, interrupting: “I…”

Book: “…that Jayne killed. Look kindly on…” (fades to…)

(Interior shot – bedroom – River tied to bed with Simon and Mal holding her arms. – Book in full Shepherd garb, swinging a smoking censor. River’s head swivels around 360 degrees and she projectile vomits to the ceiling)

VO: “Exorcisms…both traditional…

Book, chanting: “Exorcizo te, omnis spiritus immunde, in nomine Dei Patris omnipotentis, et in noimine Jesu Christi Filii ejus, Domini et Judicis nostri…”(fades to…)

(Interior shot – rural church. Crowd praying and singing. Book sermonizing in front of the altar, wearing white suit and tie. Zoe, wearing a flower print dress and on crutches, is led to the front by Wash and Kaylee. Book raises his hands in prayer and then strikes Zoe on the forehead with the palm of his hand three times as he speaks)

VO: “…and contemporary”

Book, loudly: “Yes-